*This fanfic is underneath my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Laughing Jack was created by Snuffbomb, Alyssa is my OC. This also connects to another fanfic of mine called “Two cursed young girls” which is also under my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under my forum titled “My character designs<33[2]”. Enjoy!*
Alyssa rushed to the computer, her heart pumping with joy. She had to tell everybody, they would want to hear it!
Laughing Jack wasn’t there at the moment, but neither were her parents!
Alyssa had the whole house to herself. Laughing Jack had some errands to run and her parents were going grocery shopping. Since Laughing Jack hadn’t told her to kill any animals yet, she could stay at the house.
So of course, Alyssa was on her computer, logging onto her YouTube channel. She had to tell everyone what was happening to her, she couldn’t keep the excitement boiling in her veins for much longer.
Once she was logged in, she began typing away:
🎪 🖤Rascal the clown 🖤 🎪
I haven’t logged on this channel since I was six. I’m fourteen now. That’s insane. Almost as insane as what I’m about to say. Almost.
As you all remember, I used to make Creepypasta Gacha Videos. I made videos about them all living in a mansion together. I made videos with my OC, Rascal the clown. I made them with my irl friend, whom you all knew as “The shadow reaper of doom”.
I stopped uploading one day. You all got upset. I remember.
Well now, I’m going to tell you what’s been happening with my life. What happened to my friend. Why I stopped uploading.
My friend disappeared in the Nicolet National forest, the inspiration for Slenderman’s forest. I’m not making this up. I live in Wisconsin. We used to pretend to be our OCs in the forest.
But then Laughing Jack found me. Laughing Jack, THE Laughing Jack. He said that he would help me find my friend, that I just had to listen to him.
I’m so glad that Laughing Jack is real and he wants to help. I couldn’t be happier. I won’t lie to you, losing a close friend is the WORST. But I will find him. We’ll all be together. Me, my friend, Laughing Jack. Possibly the rest, but Laughing Jack says that in real life, the Creepypastas don’t all live together. He says that not all of them like each other, either.
There’s going to be some changes to this channel. I won’t be uploading Gacha videos like I used to. I was only a child. I’m done with that now.
I want to tell you all what happens to me. What it’s like to work for a Creepypasta. What it’s like to be a Proxy.
I haven’t become a Proxy yet, but I will one day.
Please stay with me on this journey. It’s changing my life. 🖤🕷️
Alyssa stopped typing. Hopefully it was good enough. She thought that it was. It was very well-worded, very clear. Who wouldn’t believe it?
She posted it on her community tab.
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Woah, my first thought was, six and she already had some sort of channel online?? Maybe I am too old for the young writers but that seems so early to me @,@ I feel like you captured the energy of a fourteen year old really well
Also the naive belief that just posting something like that will eventually make people believe it!
I'm worried about what it means to be a proxy and that the MC doesnt seem to understand just what she's getting into. Because she was so happy both the creepypasta and her parents were gone. I'm getting a lot of mixed signals here @.@
Yes, she%u2019s definitely naive%u2026
She also spends too much time on the internet.
I have other fanfics that connect to this. I can link them to you if you want.
Hello vampricone,
The use of description and a first person blog post is pretty neat and added to the story. However I'm a bit confused to what the ending is suppose to imply. Maybe I'm reading too into it but I see a writer writing about a writer in this piece. As the author of this piece, was this your intent? Is this a blog post or so called creepypasta being written by Alyssa in real time. I like it but I feel like it could use more fleshing out. Unless this is where you would like to stop the story of course. I hope the play on narratives will lead you to write something a meta writer in writing type story some day. I'm a sucker for those kinds of stories. Thank you for the read.
You%u2019re welcome and Alyssa is a character who is being haunted by an actual Creepypasta character and posting about it on YouTube.
Here are some other fanfics that connect to this:
(I will add more later)
Two cursed young girls: Part One (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) [Chapter One: Car Ride]
Two cursed young girls: Part One (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) [Chapter Two: New house, old friends]
Two cursed young girls: Part One (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) [Chapter Three: Dinner thoughts]
Two cursed young girls:Part One (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) [Chapter Four: Sleep?]
Two cursed young girls: Part One [Nina Alexandria Hopkins) [Chapter Five: School] (Alyssa first appears in this chapter and then she%u2019s in the other two chapters after it)
Two cursed young girls: Part One (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) [Chapter Six: Odd individuals]
Two cursed young girls: Part One (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) [Chapter Seven: Creatures creeping]