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A beautiful dress for LJ

*To end the Valoween season, I wrote this Creepypasta fanfic. Laughing Jack was created by Snuffbomb and Jason the toymaker was created by Krisantyl. This fanfic is under my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff” and takes place right before their wedding (I ship the characters). Gacha Club character designs are under my forum titled “My character designs<33”. Enjoy!*

Jason had made many dolls before, he was familiar with all of the painstaking work that came with making them, but never before had he done what he was doing at that moment.

Only a few days ago, Laughing Jack had proposed to him in the abandoned carnival with the most beautiful rotten doll that he made! Jason had preserved the doll in his heart, where it could be kept safe and sound, where it wouldn’t break.

The doll was absolutely perfect and so, Jason had to make the perfect bridal dress for Laughing Jack! Sure, he could sew the dress on a mannequin, but he didn’t have any mannequins and it would take a much longer time to make the mannequin in Laughing Jack’s exact height, so, he was sewing the dress right onto Laughing Jack!

It didn’t hurt him at all, for he was a demon and seldom felt pain. In fact, he seemed to jump right into the idea, his eyes were giddy with excitement! He didn’t move a muscle that Jason had to remind himself that Laughing Jack was neither alive nor dead. Just like Jason, he simply existed and goodness, what a wonderful thought that they would spend their existence together! Why, they both knew that they had to get married soon, for although it may be a silly way for humans to feel closer to one another, it was still something that twisted the strings inside of them both with utter glee! It-

It occurred to Jason that Laughing Jack’s claw was right in front of him and so, Jason gently took ahold of his claw and kissed it, because how could he not?

Laughing Jack let his claw rest in Jason’s own and then he asked:

“How am I going to take this dress off if I don’t want to ruin your lovely work? This feels nice, but-“

“You could gently cut it off. Like this.” Jason said, getting up from the ground. He was just finishing up with sewing the skirt, but to show Laughing Jack how to take the dress off, he had to look directly into his pale white eyes and then, ever so carefully, scratched the side of his dress, at his hip, to let it unravel-

“Thank you.” Laughing Jack beamed.

“Of course.” Jason said, refraining himself from kissing Laughing Jack right then and there. Why, he had to save it for the wedding!

With that, Jason sewed that part back together with black fabric, for he was going to walk down the aisle in black and white stripes, just like his costume, for black and white were his colors and his colors alone!

The wedding was going to be perfect. Jason would make sure of that.

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Ravena
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Ravena wrote a review · Mon Jun 30, 2025 3:15 pm

Hello Again, My Friend!

Hi Vamp! Diving right back into the saga, I am here with a quick review!

Oh, how cute this was!! Jason is making a dress for Laughing Jack, preparing for their impending wedding, and the dress is even in LJ's signature striped style! A proposal with a rotten doll, a dark circus themed dress stitched right onto a giant demon-doll entity...This just screams "a creepypasta wedding"! lol.

*ahem* As far as recommendations go, I have none! This looks fine as-is to me.

For my highlights and favorite parts, I would have to go with...

Jason had preserved the doll in his heart, where it could be kept safe and sound, where it wouldn’t break.


Aw, right next to his music box. That was a cute detail!

It didn’t hurt him at all, for he was a demon and seldom felt pain. In fact, he seemed to jump right into the idea, his eyes were giddy with excitement!


There is something about the dress being stitched right onto Laughing Jack that is both endearing, and a little bit creepy. But I mean, Jason had a point! I don't think there are many mannequins with LJ's...proportions XD

With that, Jason sewed that part back together with black fabric, for he was going to walk down the aisle in black and white stripes, just like his costume, for black and white were his colors and his colors alone!


YES, love the aesthetic!!

Overall, this was too cute! I bet their wedding will be equal parts spooky and sweet ~ Nicely done! :D


Thus concludes my review. To leave off, here are some inspiring quotes, courtesy of your resident Poe freak ~

"They who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night."
"Words have no power to impress the mind without the exquisite horror of their reality.”
"I would define, in brief, the poetry of words as the rhythmical creation of Beauty."

Yes, yes it will be! You read about the wedding, actually. Would you like me to link it to you?

Also, random fact:

In my AU, LJ is 7%u20194 and Jason is 6%u20193. This is Jason%u2019s canon height, LJ doesn%u2019t have a canon height, but he can change his height canonically. Raisa is the size of an average child, so she%u2019s a little scared when either of her fathers pick her up because to her it%u2019s like going on one of those drop tower rides. She doesn%u2019t want to be dropped lol.

Glad you enjoyed!

Aw! And huh, I do remember some references to it, but I must be drawing a blank on the wedding story (sorry!)

Also, that's a cool fact! I didn't know LJ could shift his height like that, but it makes sense!

Thanks! I'll check it out next and leave a review!

Ooh wait I just checked and you didn%u2019t read it, so this is your first time$

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julia002
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This is so whimsical! I am not aware of these characters or anything creepypasta lol but your writing is very tasteful. This is a sweet short about the two on their wedding day and you can tell he cares about what she thinks. Your style seems very traditional and like watching an old film.

One tiny tiny critique I have is the grammar in this part:
"...refraining himself from kissing Laughing Jack..."
I suggest adding a comma:
"...refraining himself from kissing, Laughing Jack..."
just because I got snapped out of the story for a second because I was like "kissing-laughing-jack?" lmao idk if that was just me but that was the only changes I would personally make.

This is a charming short!

I%u2019m glad you enjoyed this short story! I tried to make it as romantic as possible!

One small thing: They%u2019re both guys.

I%u2019m glad you enjoyed this!



I will not allow my life's light to be determined by the darkness around me.
— Sojourner Truth