Published June 10, 2026 ·
Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for violence.
*This song/fanfic poem is under my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under this forum: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=117842&start=30. I found this scrolling on my notes app and I wasn’t sure what it was, but I think it’s a fanfic poem about a daughter I made for the Creepypasta Laughing Jack (you can google him if you like). The daughter in this is named Emma btw. Anyway, enjoy!*
Life’s a big ol’ circus
And every day is someone’s birthday
Ya get older an’ older
Closer an’ closer
To ya deathbed
What goes around comes around
Like father, like daughter
Shoot and stab
Everyone’s a clown
They all pretend like they’re not mad
Friends, they fall
But makeup stays on
Skip and prance
Do the circus dance
You’re a joke, I’m a joke
Might as well play along
To this tingling, jingling,
Birthday party circus song
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Not Janice, but Emma, gotcha :3
It really shows where her priorities are! Same for these btw:I love these lines:
I feel like this isn’t truly abt not taking anything seriously. This gives me more the feeling of stubborn resentment and defiance? Or playing along with expectations even if you hate them?
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Hiyaaaaaa creeper!
This is Nandini, sipping coffee and trying to relax and I think your work is always a way to calm down my overthinking nerves.
I remember Laughing Jack from May Review Day, I had done a review on a fan fiction abt him and I genuinely thought he was an intriguing character.
HE HAS A DAUGHTER? It makes his conversation with James more interesting
Ok so I did my research on Laughing Jack and oh gawd is this the thing I would like to read. I now know that he kills the kids after pretending to be their imaginary friend. And that the song "Pop Goes the Weasel" plays in the background forever, tormenting them.
I would have wished that maybe the song instead of the 'bday part circus song' (i have never listened to it) could have been included here somehow. Its a kids song? However it would still resonate with Laughing Jack's character
Shit I started yapping
Moving forward this poetry is well...very Laughing Jack
And I KNOW i like it.
Laughing Jack appears to describe life as a circus where everyday is someone's bday but him being him, also reminds us how every day brings us closer to our deathbed.
Considering I have not read any parts where his daughter was introduced, I would interpret his daughter to have the same psychotic habits as her father wich makes sense when you read in the very next line:
Ahh alr, its always been eccentric but we are leaning more into that characteristic of his.
He describes everyone as clowns and that 'friends fall'
Lemme guess? All the kids for whom he has been an imaginary friend?
He claims not to be bothered by it as he enjoys himself, skipping and prancing calling everything a joke.
It reflects well on his behaviour to just kill and I like the poem
Well done creeper!
Lots of love and cookies,
nini
lol this is the only thing I found where I wrote about his daughter %u201CEmma%u201D (OC I made up) and I also use birthday party stuff because I wanted him to be more like a birthday clown I guess. I made other daughter OCs for him.
Thx for reading!!!