*This fanfic is underneath my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under this forum: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=117842&start=15. The characters mentioned are the Creepypasta characters Lazari Swann and Sam Williams. Enjoy!*
Sam had slipped away somewhere else before Lazari could catch him. She sighed, slumping against the wall. The morning would come and she would have to hide again.
If only he didn’t run, then she would have taken him to the other side. Only temporarily, until all the other demons were gone.
But he was afraid. He saw her and ran. Or maybe he was just weak. Humans were like that.
Lazari got up and made her way back into the shadows.
She’d get him later.
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Okay, this is the next in line after Sam found Sally last chapter, right?
I wish you would have added more details on how Sam escaped Lazari, at least what she believed happened. Because it sounds like maybe Sally’s interference is what enabled him to get away?
I find the idea that Lazari needs to hide from the morning onward pretty cool! (also ofc that is standard behaviour for a lot of monsters, but I still find it cool. I am the gal who was super intrigued everytime the Gargoyles turned to stone come morning light xp)
Also…. It sounds like maybe Lazari is a bit of an unreliable narrator? Appearing to think that only evil things are out and about when she is also active?
Still no explanation on what she needs him for tho…
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