*This fanfic is underneath my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. The characters that are mentioned in this story are Laughing Jack and Jeff the killer. Laughing Jack was created by Snuffbomb and Jeff the killer was created by GameFuelTV. Gacha Club character designs are under my forum titled “My character designs <33”. Now, about this fanfic…this is told in the perspective of the mentioned Creepypastas’ ten year old daughter, Janice. She was created by both of them in a demonic ritual involving blood, bones, and artificial candy, but I am still working on said origin. Her lore is still being worked upon, I was thinking about this character all summer long. This reads as a post a child would make, so the excessive exclamation points and emojis are intentional. I wrote this back in March but I think now is an appropriate time to post this. I hope that you enjoy this short story (very short lol) and Happy Halloween season!*
Why is everybody so scared of Halloween? I love it! It’s the one time of year my parents can come out in the daylight.
You see, my parents are VERY popular Creepypastas. Like, SUPER DUPER. You’ve heard of Laughing Jack and Jeff the killer, right? I’m sure you have. Don’t say you don’t them, because chances are, if you’re chronically online like most humans, then you have seen them.
Anyway, they’re very popular, but most people don’t think that they’re real!!! Crazy, right?
They want it to stay that way. They only come out at night.
But on Halloween, we can all go out together!!! I can get candy, they can watch over me, like everybody’s else’s parents.
You know what’s funny about Halloween? Everybody thinks that my parents are wearing costumes! They’re always like: “It’s sooo realistic, where did you get that costume from?” And then we all just laugh and say it’s “DIY.” I don’t know what that word means, but I’m supposed to say it, so I do.
The best part of Halloween is not the costumes, the candy, or even all being together.
It’s putting up the “decorations”!!!!!!!>:D
Everyone thinks that the bodies my parents killed are just decorations. We hang them all around the house and everybody gets to see them!!! We either get compliments or get yelled at for being “too scary”.
I love Halloween. I love my parents. I hope I can be a good Creepypasta like them when I’m older. I want to be an amazing serial killer!!!!
I know that I don’t dress super creepy and that I’m not all brooding and stuff, but I think I have what it takes. My parents always say that being a good Creepypasta is about the murder (obviously lolz) and wanting to murder.
Halloween is the perfect time to do crimes! Nobody will ever know!
SO DON’T TELL ANYONE ABOUT US, M’KAY?!
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Hey vampricone! Dropping by to give you a review. I will be using the YWS'mores method to help structure my review.
The Top Graham Cracker: Judging from the author's note alone, I can see that this is gonna be an interesting short story! I like the idea of a "child" born from the union of two Creepypastas! Very interesting concept. So of course, that would make her just as evil and naughty as they are, but with a child-like mind and mentality. Let's see what happens!
The Slightly Burnt Marshmallow: I only noticed this one nitpick:
I felt that this sentence was missing a word, so I added it in in bold.
The Melty Chocolate Bar Overall, I thought this was really good! It read as if it was a diary entry, to be honest, so there's not much to critique. I felt that we were given a decent amount of information on Janice and her personality, as well as her thoughts and desires. Unfortunately, there wasn't much imagery or descriptive language, but that's to be expected with a diary entry sort of story. Regardless, it was still good and the reader was able to understand what was going on with Janice's narration.
My favorite lines were these:
The Bottom Graham Cracker: This was really interesting! I'm kinda curious to see what happens next with Janice. Will she follow in her parents' footsteps and begin terrorizing the town? Or will they let her stay a child for a bit longer and simply enjoy her childhood? Only time will tell...
I hope this review was a bit helpful.
~Iggy
I am so glad you enjoyed! I have much planned for her!
I made more fanfics with Janice (she%u2019s thirteen this time, not ten like in the one you read):
Janice came up with a love poem for Valentine’s Day!
Janice gives her poem to Corbin!
Ahh so many exclamation marks!
I really like Janice as a character. She's got a very distinct voice that's clear through her excessive punctuation, capital letters and a lot of her language use.
I was surprised she didn't know what DIY is though. She gives off young teenager vibes to me, and it's nothing that complicated?
Thanks for sharing!
Icy
You%u2019re welcome! She doesn%u2019t have internet access so she wouldn%u2019t really know about it. Sometimes she watches stuff on a cable TV but she doesn%u2019t have a cell phone or computer. She%u2019s aware that the internet exists and that her parents are popular online, but she doesn%u2019t have it herself. She also doesn%u2019t talk much to kids her own age.
But I%u2019m glad you enjoyed!
I made more fanfics with Janice (she%u2019s thirteen this time, not ten like in the one you read):
Janice came up with a love poem for Valentine’s Day!
Janice gives her poem to Corbin!
I wrote another fanfic with Janice:
“We are ALMOST there!”