*This fanfic is underneath my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under my forum titled “My character designs<33[2]”. This is a ship fanfic where I ship the Creepypasta characters Laughing Jack and Jeff the Killer and so they have a fanchild named Janice, whom I created. These emojis will tell you their POVS: Jeff: 🩸🔪🫀, LJ: 🍭🎪🖤, and Janice: 🦄✨🪱. Enjoy!*
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A FEW MINUTES EARLIER…
“I can’t believe they wouldn’t let you go Halloween shopping with them! I thought that you didn’t have to follow rules!” Endora said, shaking her head.
Janice and Endora were outside during recess, sitting on a bench together. Janice had just finished telling Endora about how horrible her parents were and Endora had listened and agreed with her, which was the great thing about having a best friend.
“I know, right? It’s just evil of them to do that.” Janice said, shaking her head, because how could her fathers send her to school when they were out Halloween shopping, doing spooky fun-
“Are you going to do something about it?” Endora asked, leaning towards her as if she didn’t want anyone else to hear.
Huh. Janice hadn’t thought about doing anything about it before and she went against what her fathers told her to do more than once, so-
“Yes, I am! I’m going to get out of school with my magic and you can come with me!”
At that, Endora’s blue eyes went wide with fear and she asked rather meekly:
“Are you sure? What if they…you know…decide to-“
“Kill you? They won’t. You’re my friend. And if they try to, I won’t let them.” Janice whispered, because she knew that they hated humans, but goodness, they had to calm down with that a bit.
Janice extended her bandaged claw towards Endora and tentatively, Endora took it.
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Parts one and two!:
That fine fall morning! (Part one)
That fine fall morning! (Part Two)
Hi creeper! Here with a quick review!
In this story formatting-wise for me the extra italics words were a bit distracting, I couldn't figure out why Janice's final line was in italics, or why seemingly random words were too - In all you have almost an italics word every paragraph... "believe, agreed, school, do, ..." would try to limit that a bit more!
In this sentence - "“Are you sure? What if they…you know…decide to-" make sure to add a space after an ellipses (...) so that it should read "“Are you sure? What if they… you know… decide to-"
I felt like it was quite the jump from skipping school to being afraid that the parents were going to kill them! Makes me wonder why they had that fear in the first place!
All in all, this literary work reads as a transitional character-building scene showing maybe some of Endora's naivety to trust Janice and Janice's ability to convince Endora to go with their ideas. Not a lot of stakes or plot in this scene in particular, more-so just read as character building.
Have a good day!
alliyah
I made part four:
That fine fall morning (part four) (last part!)
Ah being tempted by the best friend, typical. I rly hope that the worry of Endora being like Isaac doesn’t come true. I appreciate it if girls have girlfriends to rely on 😊
Also I am… uhm well Let’s say I have way less faith in her parents than Janice has. Hopefully she’s right and nothing bad comes of this. I like the Endora knows what’s up and believes Janice! I agree that the parents need to calm down a little.
Yeah they have no chill XD
Thx for reading!