Published June 11, 2026
*This fanfic is underneath my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under this forum: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=117842&start=30. The main character is my OC, Janice, and she is the fanchild of the Creepypasta characters Laughing Jack and Jeff the Killer. You may google her parents if you wish. Endora is also my OC. Enjoy!*
I open the box. Endora gasps for air, but she doesn’t faint. That’s good. She wasn’t in there for too long.
But she’s just staring at me and my parents, not saying a word. I hope that she isn’t scared or anything. That would be bad for her.
“I-uh-you-you’re real.” Endora stammers.
I extend my claw out for her to take, trying to get her to stop staring at my fathers. It’s nice enough that they let her live, I just can’t have her doing anything stupid.
“As real as you are.” My clown Dad smiles, waving at her.
She’s waving back, still a little scared, but again, she’s alive, so that’s a good thing.
I’ll get her out of the house, but I hope that she can come back. I have so much cool stuff to show her.
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This might be the first time I've actually completed all the parts of one of your stories! Okay, so we are at the third and last part now, and I noticed it is SUPER short. I wanted more! I know there's more in the series and other characters, but I loved the friendship that was developing between Janice Endora and would have loved to see more of their dynamic in the last part.
Again, maybe more description here. What does she look like after being trapped in a box, hearing a Clown-Dad-Murderer-Creepypasta-Dude wants to kill her? How much did she hear?
This IS creepy, but in the last part, Clown-Dad had a lot more to say. I think more chat between him and Endora would have really improved this section!
Ahh Janice, I love how sweet she is. This terrifying experience happens, and all she can think about is her stuff XD What cool stuff? Toys? Body parts? More creepy clown dad? I want to know!
I hope they remain friends, but for Endora's own safety, I don't think she should go back!
Okay I take that back, given how short this is, I think having it at the end of the last part would have worked way, way better ^^°
I mean, I like that we get her reaction here and I like that Janice continues to be so... non-chalant and "mb we do have to kill her if she is stupid" in her narration but it still feels as if this could have been a better wrap-up as a two part story! I feel like the closer we get here, with Endora's little wave, would have worked even better last part XD
I also really like this friendship between Endora and Janice, even knowing that Endora will end up kinda condoning the killing (i mean, what else are you gonna do with murder creepypastas in your life, right?)
So happy writing :3
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I%u2019m glad you enjoyed reading this and thx for the advice! I wanted their friendship to feel like it was realistic but also not have them act out of character so I%u2019m glad you liked their interactions.
I was also writing this in real time so by the time the second part was out I was working on this one and waiting to publish this. But thx for reading! ^v^