*This fanfic is underneath my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under this forum: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic/117842-my-character-designs-lt-33-3?start=105. The main character is Sam Williams, a Creepypasta character you can google if you’d like. Enjoy!*
He stood in the middle of a carnival, all of the rides and attractions like broken skeletons blooming hauntingly in the darkness. Sam didn’t know how he got there, but there he was.
There were children crying but he didn’t see them. No matter where he looked, nobody was there.
And yet it felt there was someone watching him, waiting for him. Sam thought he saw the glimpse of long black claws, but it was only seconds and everything looked black in the night.
He took one step forward and felt his feet sink deep into the ground, deeper, deeper, deeper still-
Sam’s eyes shot open, facing the safe shadows that was his ceiling and hearing the shuffling of feet which told him Sally was there. He tried to tell his parents and they never listened, not even with photos.
So he’d have to face it with just her.
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