*This fanfic is underneath my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Jason is a Creepypasta created by Krisantyl. Lucy, Amelia, and Johnathan are all in Jason’s backstory. I’m writing stuff from Jason’s backstory but with more of his own thoughts/perspectives on them. Gacha Club character designs are in my forum “My character designs<33[2]”. Enjoy!*
As always, Jason played by himself, with his makeshift toys. He didn’t mind the loneliness so terribly, he just didn’t like that Amelia was on the swings with Lucy.
Didn’t Lucy know to back off? Didn’t she know what happened to Johnathan? Why was she trying to take Amelia away from him?
Jason got up from the ground and ran towards the swings. Lucy was very bad, and he had to teach her how to be good.
Just like with Johnathan, his hands met her back and she fell to the ground.
“HEY! You pushed me!” Lucy cried out.
Jason swallowed down his feelings of joy at seeing Lucy on the ground, tears in her eyes. He couldn’t act too happy about it in front of Amelia.
“I’m sorry! I didn’t mean to! I just wanted to go on the swings!” Jason cried out.
“Yes you did! You pushed me!” Lucy sobbed, pointing a shaking finger at him.
“Don’t yell at him! He said sorry!” Amelia said.
Amelia got off the swing and rushed to help Lucy up. Jason watched as Amelia walked Lucy over to the nurse’s office, for her tears were mixing with her blood, for the ground was concrete, not grass.
His recess wasn’t exactly what he imagined. He had hoped that Amelia would play with him, but the next day would be better.
She’d play with him then.
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Hello Again, My Friend!
And at last, I return to the LJ and Jason saga! Ooo, I've been eager to catch up here. Let's dive right in...
Oh snap, it seems Jason has found his next target, and it feels like he is losing some restraint! Attacking Lucy in front of Amelia, who doesn't even have the headspace to scold or shame him for what he did. Perhaps this is a sign of not just Jason growing more confident, but Amelia losing her own, slowly becoming more beholden to him...
*ahem* As for recommendations, yet again, none! Sorry I've got nothing after three reviews now, but I've noticed that it's kinda hard to find anything to remark on (in this regard) with these shorter stories, lol. No typos, and overall, less to go wrong! Maybe for this one, it could've been interesting to see a bit of buildup, maybe showing off the influence Jason is gaining over Amelia? But not only is this something that can still be explored in another story, that's like complaining because the delicious cake you made doesn't have sprinkles, it's so minor XD Overall, still great!
As for favorite bits...
I like how RIGHT off the bat, we see Jason scheming to himself from across the playground. It feels so devious ~
Oh man, the sociopathic undertones of him having to hold back a grin at the girl he just pushed and bloodied. SO creepy! I love the subtle unsettling nature here.
Oh no man, what is he planning now?? (00 ') What a cliffhanger!
Overall, REALLY enjoying the buildup in this one! Nicely done!
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So glad you enjoyed and yes, Amelia doesn%u2019t see Jason as doing anything wrong, but she is kinda losing herself the more she hangs out with him and tries to give him the benefit of the doubt. He truly is an awful person XD.
More Jason stuff lol. This time, he%u2019s an adult:
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This is a really nice short story. The way Jason pushes Lucy on the ground because he wanted Amelia to himself is hilarious. I thought Amelia would, like, yell at Jason but she defended him instead. I can see them dating in the future. It makes me want more than I just read. I love this so, so, SO much. Keep it up your darling, you’re doing amazing.