*This fanfic is under my folder “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under this forum: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic/117842-my-character-designs-lt-33-3?start=210. The main character is my ship child OC, the daughter of the Creepypasta characters Laughing Jack (clown) and Jason the Toymaker (he looks human but he’s not). She is eight years old. Anyway, enjoy!*
9/24/1955
Hello,
I HATE my dreams!! I don’t want to go to sleep anymore! Last night I dreamed that I was in a different house and I was screaming “stop!” but I don’t know why I was screaming it. My fathers came into my room because it turns out I was screaming in real life.
The night before I had a dream that all the doll children were bloody and they were crawling all over the floor and spitting bugs. It was so gross! I think they were trying to crawl to me and make me like them!! So disgusting!!!!
And I HATE HATE HATE the kids at school! They’re never nice to me but now they are even worst than they were before! One of the girls in my class pulled on my hair and saw my face AND THEN SHE CALLED ME UGLY! Everybody else laughed! So I did something that I only do to the dolls and I kicked her! She started crying like a baby and then the teacher made me sit in a chair in the corner because I was “being bad”. She said she was going to hit me with a ruler if I did that again.
I didn’t do it again. I told my parents what happened and they said that I don’t have to go to school anymore. I’m happy they’re not mad at me.
I’m gonna tell my parents that I want to go to Disney World again. I hope they will let me go. I don’t want to be in this town anymore. I don’t want to get out of my room unless I’m going to Disney World.
I want to see Mickey Mouse.
Goodbye,
Raisa Accardi.
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Hello!
Okay this is going to be a quick 1955 check, since there are some historical inaccuracies... though perhaps there is some weird alternate universe going on? If there isn't...
1. Disney World didn't exist until the 1970s! However, Disneyland had just opened up several months prior.
2. Unless this is an alternate timeline in a different universe, having fathers, in the plural, probably wouldn't have been a thing anywhere in the world. Homosexuality was INCREDIBLY taboo in the 1950s (though it did exist!)
Anyway! The doll children... are creepy. And the other children are mean. The whole situation stinks.
Kind of hope she gets a Mickey Mouse doll, lol.
*Yes, it was my fault for not checking up before I read that lol, I’m gonna try and make it seem like a weird time thing since it is too late to change it now.
*I already knew that, however, her parents are not humans and they do not abide by whatever humans believed in at the time. Also, they are hardly ever seen in the daylight, only at night. Even so they care not for what humans can say or do since they have the power to make them…*disappear*. They’ve both together for many centuries but do not marry until 2024 and that is in an abandoned carnival. But they’ve *basically* been married to each other, in a sense.
I hope I’m making sense.
Hia creeper, let’s see what Raisa is up to this time around, huh? =D
I love how you nailed the tone of Raisa in this one. Like, her frustration is palpable! It’s the combination of the dreams and the unfortunate school sit… But huh I did wonder abt the dreams. I mean clearly the doll thing with the bugs is a reference to what her parents are doing to the doll children (you cannot be a daughter of creepypastas and come out on the other end unscathed, mentally ☹)
And I am so curious abt the underlined “like them” bc… Does she mean she will become like the dolls? Or that the dolls want to be liked by her? There is something to say abt either interpretation but …nothing good. The fact that she recoils at the thought alone is telling enough…
Aww the ending is so despair-inducing! I feel for this poor girl qq Well done!
Thank you! They wanted to make her decay like them.
Woo, back to Raisa! Haven't read a chapter of her's in a while!
Omg poor Raisa. I always feel so bad for her. I can really feel her panic about the dream bleed through here.
Woah that's terrifying! The image here is disgusting!! I wonder what this signifies...
Oh god, how mean of that girl. I think Raisa was right to kick her! I wonder if here, there's room to explore a bit about how this made her feel?
I was going to say; someone who is the daughter of two creepypastas surely could get out of going to school!
I HOPE THEY TAKE HER!! I WANT A DISNEY CHAPTER!
This is so wholesome.
I do like how you capture the child's voice very well through the diary form. It's really fun to read, and I am always rooting for poor Raisa XD
Aww thx!! I’m glad you liked it!