Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for violence and mature content.
*This fanfic is underneath my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under my forum titled “My character designs<33[2]”. Laughing Jack’s creator is Snuffbomb and yes, the creator I mention in this story IS his actual creator and Creeps is an actual show on YouTube that his creator made. I don’t know if the show was supposed to be an AU the creator made or canon but it was made in like 2013 so I probably shouldn’t be too upset. I just wish LJ and a lot of other Creepypasta characters were taken more seriously during those times and not “memes”. Whatever, I made this fanfic off of my AU of LJ and I hope that it’s funny and that you enjoy it! He greets with “cheers” because he is canonically British! Also, LJ is a murderous demon clown from the Creepypasta fandom!*
Cheers, human worms. I’m not feeling particularly well, and I do sincerely apologize if I sound more vicious than usual.
I thought that not a single thing could get any more abysmal than they already were, but it appears that I was wrong.
A little whippersnapper told me about the YouTube show, “Creeps”, created by Snuffbomb, which was about me.
After I slaughtered the teen, I searched it up on the wasteful app “YouTube” (which was arduous to do with my claws) and watched all three episodes.
I knew Snuffbomb before he was Snuffbomb. I knew Snuffbomb when he was Steve Aikins.
Trust me, he’s not my creator. I’ve existed since the early 1800s, he didn’t create me.
But we did meet. On rocky circumstances, but we still met.
I was going to kill him. He was sobbing, begging for freedom. I don’t know what happened to me that day, but I was feeling particularly kind that day and spared his life.
What the devils was I thinking?
Steve didn’t forget me. He wrote stories about me. He posted me all over the internet, for everyone to know about my existence. He dressed up as me. He grossly misinterpreted my stories and my personality and turned me into the burping, “keNtUckY fRieD cHilDrEn” eating creature that haunts the screen in the show “Creeps”.
I wish that I never heard of that show, but I’m also glad that I did, because now I have more incentive to leave the Creepypasta fandom for good.
Because everyone knows who I am, I’d have to change my form. I haven’t considered doing this for centuries until now, and I have two forms in mind:
I could also disappear off the face of this Earth. As an entity, I can do that.
If anyone has any better forms or other ideas for me, let me know! I can’t take much of this tomfoolery any longer. Seriously.
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Part one of these unserious fanfics:
Laughing Jack laments about he is portrayed, part one
Ha, i love this story! It's a welcome change to all the murder and eldritch horror of the other stories, and I laughed a lot reading it. I really enjoy reading these "fresh new take" sort of stories, and while i'm not too familiar with the urban myth, i'll still do my best to review this.
Ok, firstly I love that jack breaks the fourth wall so many times to make urban myth culture references.
I tried to imagine what it would look like for laughing jack to try and scroll youtube (or the idea of them having a phone) and I immediately doubled over laughing.
This sentence could have a little more tension, because it kind of seems out of place. Plus, the repeat from "what happened to me" and "feeling particularly kind" isn't really necessary since he proceeds to explain why he freed Steve.
I love the idea that a terrifying murderous creature is keeping with the times and also the 4th wall break, again. I kind of like to imagine Jack creating a fandom.com account and getting increasingly enraged as he finds out what they've done to his representation. After the story he definitely tried to kill steve.
I think this sentence is missing some key context relating to the youtube series, since not "everyone" always knew who Jack was. Perhaps adding "Now, everyone knows who I am" and then going on to explain why he is and how he is thinking of future forms would help.
I like that you added a lot of british vernacular, which I appreciate. It makes the story feel more like an actual article jack would write.
Keep adding on!
- Vic
Super glad you enjoyed!
i forgot again. Plus, ravena beat me to reviewing this.
Hello Again, My Friend!
Alright, part two! Let's jump right into this one!
OMG, if the first one didn't do it for me, this one definitely did—I can't stop seeing LJ as a ticked-off drama YouTuber! XD Is the next arc going to be him as a VTuber? Guest-starring Jason, beefing with Jeff? Omg the potential here is limitless, it really is lol.
*ahem* Once again, no complaints! Let's move straight into highlights, here:
Ah yes, the classic opening line of "sorry I'm sick chat, I sound different today" (and they usually don't sound different at all) XD
The mental image of Jack struggling to tap about on a screen with his claws should not have made me chuckle like it did lol.
At first I was curious and slightly concerned where you were taking this backstory with Snuff, but the way you framed it was awesome! "I spare your life, and you turn me into sloptube content?!" XDD Hey, Jack, at least you weren't spawned from a couple of random memes *ahem ahem, Slenderman, ahem*
OMG, it's giving the clickbait "I'm Done" or "It's Over" thumbnail vibes XDD
Again, this was such a hilarious new way to explore LJ here, I loved it! Nicely done!
"They who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night."
"Words have no power to impress the mind without the exquisite horror of their reality.”
"I would define, in brief, the poetry of words as the rhythmical creation of Beauty."
Thank you so much and yes, LJ really hates how he is portrayed lol.