*This fanfic is under my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under my forum titled “My character designs<33[2]”. Alyssa is my OC, Laughing Jack is a Creepypasta character created by Snuffbomb. Enjoy!*
Alyssa logged into her computer. She had time to herself, and she’d use that to her advantage.
After logging in, she logged into her YouTube account, to where her followers waited eagerly for an update on her killings:
🎪🖤 Rascal the clown 🖤🎪
I’ve only killed animals, but the very first animal I ever killed was a cat. Remember Laughing Jack’s origin story? He killed a CAT!
I swear, we’re connected. The fact that the first animal I came across was a CAT. It’s like, we were destined to meet. I can’t wait until Laughing Jack lets me kill people, and even more so to know what happened to Kevin. I tell you, the first rush of murder is like a breath of fresh air, it’s like finally being yourself.
Thank you for being here with me. I can’t go on without you.
Alyssa smiled as she made her community post. Perhaps one day, her followers would follow Creepypastas of their own.
Everyone was meant to be with a Creepypasta. Everyone.
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Oh I remember I read a story about Alyssa already. She's the influencer, right?
Ah... There probably is a very specific crowd who is just eagerly waiting for someone to share their animal murder stories (and possibly their human murder stories?) which just makes this so creepy. It does make me wonder if there will ever be any consequences for her to so openly talk about this or if whatever keeps Laughing Jack save from this kind of scrutiny also applies to her. Hmmm.
Well, she is going to pay for it later. He%u2019s not exactly someone she should trust. Because nobody is there to really stop her, things get bad before she can fix them.
Glad you enjoyed!
Hi,
I haven't read the rest of your fanfic, but this seems interesting. I'm interested to learn why Alyssa is killing animals and possibly a human? One line that really stood out to me is "I tell you, the first rush of murder is like a breath of fresh air, it’s like finally being yourself." I look forward to learning more about Creepypastas and the characters in this world. Is Alyssa evil or is there more nuance to it? Is murder legal and a part of society in this world or is it illegal, something to be feared?
It would be nice if this piece was a little longer and more detailed, so that new readers who stumble upon this have a bit more background or sense of the world they're entering. If you're looking to keep it mysterious, the way it's written is great. Beyond that, I don't have any specific suggestions. Your use of italics is appealing and I'm excited to read more of your work
Thank you, I%u2019m glad you enjoyed this.
Murder is not legal in this fanfic world but she thinks it%u2019s okay to do because he said so.