*This fanfic is underneath my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under this forum: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic/117842-my-character-designs-lt-33-3?start=120. Laughing Jack (demon clown) and Jeff the Killer (he wields a knife) are Creepypasta characters that can be googled. This is a ship of them. The main character is my fanchild ship OC, Janice. Endora is also my OC. Enjoy!*
All night long I had been thinking about what I should do to make Endora stay my friend. I don’t think she was scared of me yesterday but I don’t think that she was very happy about it either.
I couldn’t think of anything, so I asked my fathers what I should do. My Clown Dad gave me something. I’m going to give it to her today.
Right now I’m sitting in the back desk, right in the dark corner. She sits in front of me, so I’m waiting for Endora to come. She’s not here yet.
I hope she likes what I have for her. It’s better than the candy my Clown Dad made me give Miss. Reese, anyway.
She’s walking into the classroom, wearing bright pink. I like pink. It goes well with her red hair.
Endora takes her seat in front of me and before she takes out her notebook, I tap her shoulder.
“Oh! Hi-hi.”
She seems a little nervous. But not afraid like the victims. She doesn’t look like she’s about to scream.
“I got you something. You can eat it at lunch with me. Take some now and put it in your bag. The chocolate won’t melt.”
I lean in closer to tell her that it’s magic that won’t make the chocolate melt. Then, I take out a brown paper bag and throw some of it into her hand.
“What’s this?!” Endora asks. Now she seems frightened, but there’s nothing to be afraid of!
I have to whisper again so she knows:
“It’s chocoroaches. Chocolate covered cockroaches. My Clown Dad made them. He makes all kinds of weird candies. Don’t worry, they’re not alive.”
“They’re…kind of gross.”
“Trust me. They’re really good.”
I don’t know what else to say to get her to like them, but she turns back around, with the chocoroaches I gave her.
She didn’t throw them away. She kept them.
I can’t wait for her to try them later!
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This is enjoyable (especially the ending).
I can really relate to Endora !
Keep up!
Glad you liked it!
Good morning creeper! As promised, I bring you a review =D
Maybe it’s because they feel a bit too cut off? But I guess you don’t want to specify that it’s candy just yet, right?Also, lol I will get a 40 point bonus because I read so many of your works in this folder~
Well, that first paragraph is super relatable huh? Oh how can I make sure she stays my friend… Endora is a bit of a weirdo himself so maybe there was no reason to help this along.
I feel like these two sentences don’t flow very well:
Ohhh the candy Miss Reese has that she never opened xd love the easter egg =D
I feel it’s not quite clear who says that: Maybe if you place the dialogue either in the above or below paragraph, it will become clearer?
I can’t help but feel like everything her dads do is very sinister and murder-y so idk abt the candy. And it doesn’t help that Janice is so innocent and used to their shenanigans that she doesn’t see a problem. I don’t trust her narration; she’s clearly biased! =D
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Yes, she is very much biased. As a young child who loves her Dads, she does not see anything they do as bad.
But the candy isn’t poisoned or anything. Just disgusting, since it isn’t candy at all but cockroaches in chocolate.
This is really good so far! Loving the part about how- hmm, childish? Not in a mean way, but it really seems like someone young is thinking. You did an excellent job at expressing and making the whole thing seem real! This is excellent and I will check out other work- but one thing in mind was How realistic this all was. You’re really really good at expressions and making people believe what you write.
Can’t wait to read more!
-your fellow YWS member
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