Hey, just here to leave a quick review! Overall, this was a great chapter with a lot of lore into how devas work (static vs active) which was much needed ...

Nerve racking moments I am in my school’s advert Please forget me now

On the shore, low tide As the Sun burns brightly And seagulls squawk

Hi there Rook 1. What did i like the most in the story Rook is that this is my first time reading your chapter Connection i see that you got ...

This wasn't happening. This wasn't happening. This... was going to get worse if she didn't get herself under control. Rain took a deep breath and actively forced her shoulders to ...

Holding cell confrontation

hi once again! this felt different to the prologue and the first chapter. a nice change. the perspective is rather interesting, considering the perspective in the prologue. the time change ...

A poem about first heartbreak

“It’ll be less suspicious if we look the same,” she explained, before he could ask the question...

Hi Shady! Lim here with a short review. From what I remember last time, I think this is tackling the subject of Kylia’s self-worth issues and removal from her home ...

Ha! Relatable and funny.I feel this way a lot sense of humor is..odd.When I tell jokes some people give me a look.Honsetly,it’s frustrating because these are just jokes.Not who I ...

In which Charax and Malia arrive

Hey, just here to leave a quick review! This was a good aftermath chapter here. One thing you have done really well is giving us an explanation of the absence ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, Your hair is to red, ...

This is a poem I've written mostly just for myself, and I wasn't going to publish it, but I liked it so I thought "Eh, why not."

Hi there Rebel 1. What did i like the most in the poem Rebel is that Late in the evening, I stand in delight To check my money and my ...