Helloooo! Here to write a review : ) I was very intrigued by the title, by the way. Gives off a lot to the imagination. Immediately the first line stuck ...

My gut says go for the first one, but my sense of humor says go with the second. :P I'm down for whatever one you want! :)

Into the town...

Wow! What a sweet poem! It shows the love that is out there in the world.I sure hope the old woman and her child grow to have a lovely relationship ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! That was a narrow escape. I really liked this part. It had that feeling of hurry in it besides providing the readers time to ...

:D Anyone able to post with the characters that are up at this point?

Ooops...sorry, I nearly forgot! I'll have a character up sometime in the next few hours :D

Hello! This is the first review I've written in a while so I may be a bit rusty. That said, let's get into it. “Hannah? Hannah Ford?” Ms. Green called ...

The horseback ride ends with a cheeky surprise

Hello! 'Rained poured' - 'Rain poured'' Okay, strong start but it feels a bit detached that you mention the rain then jump straight into the character's thoughts. Maybe situate the ...

Hi waywardxwallflower, Mailice here with a short review! :D I wanted to review your article since three weeks and now I finally have the time for it. So, let´s go! ...

Hello! First off, formatting. This is just one chunky paragraph and should be separated into sections. When a new event happens, new paragraph. Speech, new paragraph. 'One morning a few ...

Hi Horisun, Mailice here with a short review! :D I guess the day began normal. I mean, other than the excitement of my cousins coming, it was a pretty average ...

*pokes you back* Thank you for the nudge! I don't know how I didn't reply before, but poor Susie. :(

*pokes you back*

I'm also here! :)