something i wrote a year or two back so it's not exactly written with an audience in mind but feedback is still very much appreciated :]

Hey Harry! RandomTalks here with a short review! I really liked this part. This was the most interesting meeting so far, as it entailed everything that a meeting is supposed ...

Come join me in here please?

hihi here to review :3 silver with the water, i like the imagery of this line. i feel like the tone is pretty poignant? especially in the last lines instead ...

@Spearmint Haha! That was great! You did a wonderful job, I loved it. :D @Terian805, Would you like to post next? (Also, uh, are those bats.... real? :smt009)

ello ello another review :] notes ringing out through the panes of glass, breaching the vaccuum between us. i like this contradictions since sound/vibrations can't travel through a vacuum :3 ...

This is a lovely story about the relationship between mother and daughter.What a nice twist at the end,too.I’d thought for sure she’d keep the house,with all of the memories attached ...

A story I had to write for my creative writing class with "home" as a prompt.

hiya! droppin by for a review :] anyways, i like the concept of this poem: subverting the ideas around something that would normally be considered an insult as something beautiful. ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : this was a pretty solid piece here. It ...

A little conversation...

Here it is. Not the spookiest but not bad.

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : HMm, well this is...a decent piece here. I ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Two consecutive chapters from Daisy's POV. It's definitely intriguing. Great, then the four of you can I thought there were 5 people. I just ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Now we have Sehlingen, the very first place in which the story had started. It reminds us of how they thought of Leonard in ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : as far as first part goes, this is ...