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Wallace and Kaspar go on Kaspar's special trip to the woods

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Hi Necromancer14, Mailice here with a short review! :D This was a different kind of fairy tale and I must say I liked it. You created two sympathetic characters who ...

A short piece about two siblings written for my creative practice class. 338 words

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Oh dear...The Narrator has breached containment

Hey there! Plume here, with a review! What an inventive Christmas tale!! I loved the twist at the end; I actually didn't see it coming. I thought you were just ...