Hey there, @BeingRivy, here for a review :) I think this story really holds up together, there's only this one thing that needs a bit more effort. Your characters. For ...

Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review!! I quite enjoyed Julius' POV. He is quite an interesting character and this was a good change from the atmosphere of the previous ...

Hi soundofmind, Mailice here with a short review! :D I´m not so sure about it anymore, but I read in your post, that this is some sort of continuation of ...

Hello there general kenobi Lim it's me again, back for another review :D Gerhard didn’t know what the smaller things meant anymore, when they had been so bright and clear ...

There was a perfectly good reason why Lim hadn't taken on the couch's challenge of haiku. It was because the couch was scary. Now, a microwave was something she could ...

Hi YourFriendlyWriter, Mailice here with a short review! :D This is quite a big first chapter, where we are partly overloaded with a lot of different information, so that I ...

Wallace and Kaspar go on Kaspar's special trip to the woods

Hi annliyaaa, Mailice here with a short review! :D I have to say that you have written a very good essay and I also think that it is very interesting ...

Hi 4revgreen, Mailice here with a short review! :D At first glance, this short story seems very exciting in the sense that we get to see quite a bit of ...

Hi Necromancer14, Mailice here with a short review! :D This was a different kind of fairy tale and I must say I liked it. You created two sympathetic characters who ...

A short piece about two siblings written for my creative practice class. 338 words

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : This is a really nice piece here I ...

Hi Chairywrites, Mailice here with a short review! :D First of all welcome here on YWS! I Hope you have fun here. :D First of all, I would like to ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : this was a decent piece here. There was ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : This is a pretty well executed start here ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : this I think is a really nicely done ...