Hi soundofmind, Mailice here with a short review! :D You enchant the reader with a strange yet interesting writing style that entices you to keep reading and not stop. Then, ...

Posted! We're at the second page now. :) Even though Mage might have turned down Harry's offer, I'd love to have them fake being pirates. >> Maybe we could have ...

Hi Yosh, Mailice here with a short review! :D Unfortunately, I can't remember exactly how the first chapter went, so I'm coming at this from a new vantage point where ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : As far as prologues go, this one feels ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : This was a nice little opening scene here ...

Hi WrenZorya, Mailice here with a short review! :D Nice to see that the story is continuing here! :D Let's start right now and jump in before I decide what ...

Hi MissGangamash, Mailice here with a shot review! :D At first glance, this chapter seems like a promising, relaxed little excursion in itself. Just as the title promises, you have ...

I really enjoyed the poem. I like the way you weave different religions together to pass a message. The ' accidents of apostles', ' faulty prophets', and ' careless fathers' ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : here this is a lovely opening scene I ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : This was an interesting start here. A slightly ...

I hope you all enjoy this.

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Hello, I've just recently joined this website and this was the first short story I've read and I can say, with confidence, that this is one of the best I've ...

I loved this. It's nice to hear someone describe a setting, and to know that this came from the heart made it so much better. This little paragraph was nice ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : OKayy...this is a lovely and very simple little ...