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Good morning/afternoon/evening to you! Alpacaboss here :D First Impression: ouch, just ouch, the ending broke my heart. And I was rooting for Oliver :( In terms of reality, this is ...

Knight Alliyah, Court Magician for the Knights of the Green Room, had been on a few wild quests during her time on YWS - a search for a Dragon , ...

poem ii i lost you in phoenix and you didn’t rise again— you lasted long enough to make it out of the suburban sprawl, at least. you had this story ...

Hello! Your neighborhood Angie here to leave a review :) As I read the poem for the first time, one of my immediate thoughts was, "This is a really good ...

Hi! Good morning/afternoon/evening. This... is incredibly sad. There's so much I want to say about this, but honestly I've got no words. The thought of rearranging animal parts as well ...

Hello! Your neighborhood Angie here to leave a review! :) This is an amazing first chapter! The way you draw the reader in and introduce them to the world is ...

Heyo. I'm here to leave a review. Before I begin: This short story is filled with suspense and mystery. The main character (I'm assuming. Correct me if I'm wrong) Daisy, ...

This story was so sad and emotional. It was well-written, too. I felt hopeful in the moments where the guy believed in her and defeated when he left her. She ...

An artificial human stitched into the world by a grumpy toy maker just wants its own identity. Inspired by a dream I once had.

Hi! Your neighborhood Angie here to leave a review! :) First of all, wow! Your poem touches something that almost everyone can relate to or have related to at one ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well this was a nice little sort of ...

Dannnnggg this is written so well!! I love how you leverage the unreliable narrator here. At first, the reader assumes the story is about a young woman named Daisy who ...

This whole time, Clandestine been watching James. There had been several hours where she'd had to leave him alone while she dug up Alexander's grave, but ever since she'd come ...

Hello there! This is Ina aka loveissourgrapes and I am here to give you a review/comment for your lovely poem about those lovely rainy days. I am glad I got ...

d*mn, i luvvv writings like this. when they fool about things. but i love how the message is that you shouldn't fool innocent people online yet you fooled us with ...