It is so good . I like the fact that you are so honest. And it is also Something like what i am going through . And it is nice ...

Hey there! Plume here, with a review! Ooh, what a cliffhanger-y ending to close off on! I loved all the intrigue and goings-on in this chapter. It was super interesting ...

Climax! And a lil bit of falling action. We're approaching the end!!!

Lovely and dramatic story to read! It could just be a simple story about someone wanting to swim,like fish,but it could also be about someone being attacked by the rest ...

As someone who has never played basketball before, and barely understands it on even a surface level, lemme say I was shocked by how invested I got into this. The ...

Good idea! I’m definitely getting ideas for that magic stone thingy. Maybe each person’s respective element stone ends up somewhere close to them one day, they all find it, and ...

Hey! I saw this chapter hanging out here in the Green Room, and decided to check it and the previous one out! Overall, I really enjoyed both! They're super lighthearted, ...

Good afternoon! I hope you're having a good day today! I really enjoyed this chapter; right at the start, you immediately hooked the reader. Throughout the entire chapter, I was ...

Warning: This work involves bad language, murder, and also magic

Hello, I am leaving a review. This was a dense piece so I made sure to read it aloud a few times. I liked this line. "yet there is no ...

Hey Harry! RandomTalks here with a short review! It seems that we are at the end of the chapter. I was fully surprised by the way you left things as ...

Hey! Andrew here for a review! Welcome to the site! I have to say you really embraced the short part of the short story. I'd almost call this a poem ...

Well harrrrryyy andrew's back. Sorry for the drought of reviews, got sick, had thanksgiving, had to work on ghost walk stuff, and fell in love. It's been a month, to ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! We are one more chapter away from the end! I can't believe this! This was an interesting beginning to the chapter. Again we are ...

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