Hey there ! Here with a review :D This was a really moving piece. I loved the way you presented this incredibly serious yet true topic. It's something not enough ...

Hey there ! Before I move on analysing this piece, I just saw your synopsis (?) The thing under the title, which says what your story is about. Ok so ...

Cool poem I love the word play used throughout that justifies the title "Around the World". You use word play and figurative language very well in this to show how ...

Hey there ! Hope you're having a lovely day ! Or night ! Or afternoon ! Or whatever Okay wow ! This was quite a read ! Let's start with ...

Nice introduction to a series there's nothing much to critique for my personal standards this is good writing to me. Only things I suggest making this part more clear for ...

Thank you ^o^ Also almost forgot to ask this! We need to discuss exactly what each of us can do with our elements? Like what can we do and not ...

Very inspiring poem what this poem talks about is something I really struggle with, a feeling of loss and a chaotic or sad self image, the "sense of self". The ...

Hey guys. So as we wait to see if anyone else wants to join please start getting ideas for your posts. Obliviously A Nox chapter will be the first and ...

Hi there! This piece is very beautiful and poetic. There is almost a stream-of-consciousness style about it that really adds to your musings of twilight. Twilight really is such a ...

There is now a doodle poll in the discord for the brainstorming session! Please head over to the discord and put the times you would be able and willing to ...

Hi Col3, Mailice back with a short review! :D Wow is what I have to say about this. Somehow the story has gone from one extreme to the next and ...

Hello! This is quite emotional. 'I become empty' - I'm a little confused by the tense choice here. Has something just happened to make the narrator suddenly empty or do ...

Hi Col3, Mailice here with a short review! :D I actually really liked the composition of this chapter. It had a better overview and good structure than the previous one.But ...

Hello! There's a lot of repetition here. 'Wall' is mentioned 8 times, if I've counted correctly. It makes the piece kinda clunky. Like, we get it, there's a wall. The ...

Hello! Okay, lets get into this. The narrative style is very stunted. There is not heart to it, no real sense of who Joseph is. All I know is he ...