Hey! RandomTalks here with a short review! Well, this was quite the depressing start to the story. You opened with a gruesome scene and I honestly had not expected all ...

Hey Harry! RandomTalks back with another review! I wish you had included that first bit in the previous part. As a result the starting of this part, felt like the ...

Hey Harry! RandomTalks here with a short review! I liked how this part felt a little separated from the main plot. It felt like a moment to breathe and take ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, Victoria was sat at the ...

:( Harry's lost a lot of people to time. Ahh...yes...xD, that would be a good question. Also I had Harry reveal what that item was for some support there... and ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, Mom used to tell me ...

You're welcome! :) I know the last few posts have mostly been back-and-forth between @HarryHardy and me, but I had an idea for a post this morning and just had ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, I buried my hands deep ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, She awoke in the morning ...

Hope...maybe

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, A long time ago there ...

Hey, Delirium Nervosa here to leave a review. I really enjoyed what you have written so far and eagerly await the next installment. This piece is written really well, but ...

Hi queenshadowgem, Delirium Nervosa here to leave a review on your poem. What can I say but WOW! That piece was extremely engaging and relatable. The way you have structured ...

Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review! Daughter of a victim doesn't really seem to be a bad name. It's quite good and I can't remember having heard that name ...

Hi AlyTheBookworm, Delirium Nervosa here to leave a review on your poetry. I am not a poet myself, however, I really enjoy reading the talents of other writers. And your ...

Hi Delirium Nervosa here to leave a review on your poem. Firstly, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. I found the rhythm slightly uneven, however, I was completely enthralled in ...