Hello FireEyes my name is GoodieGoat. I hope you are having a wonderful day and this finds you well! I noticed the genre listed as humor and satire. I attempted ...

Hey, there! I like how you numbered each item in this poem. It gives it a sense of structure by theme and helps keep it moving. You have taken a ...

back in here!

Hi Harry, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Let's get started, yes? The trio made their way out through the dilapidated doorway and towards ...

Well,this could be what a void would feel if they were a person.I don’t know if that’s what your friend wanted,but it does sound like a poem a void would ...

Heyyy @Buranko!!! here is a review on what i had read on!! so shall we get in to this poem First Buranko this poem was so short when i started ...

you miss one day of school and suddenly you've moved up a grade

Hey Mailice! RandomTalks back with another review! I will be honest. Aa I was reading through this chapter, I wanted to hit myself on the head several times for not ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : this was actually a pretty good first chapter, ...

Hey Mailice! A little late with the review, but in my defense school has been killing me with assignments and exams. Now, let's get on with the review! This was ...

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Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : So this was a pretty solid first chapter. ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! I do know I am extremely late. Sorry for that. Anyway, into the review. Okay, so now we are connecting things. It really gives ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : I really liked the ending to this chapter. ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : this is a pretty cool part here, perhaps ...

So I had a sudden burst of inspiration and free time today and cooked something up. Its on line 123 . Lemme know if there's anything I need to change ...