Hey GSLeigh! RandomTalks here with a short review! Its been a long time since I have reviewed a short story, so I might be a little rusty. But the concept ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Okayy...this is quite the opening paragraph here. I ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was an interesting part we had here. I liked the short detour to Leonard and Monique. This was kind of a beginning to ...

Lady was shaken out of her snow trance as @elfboys voice sounded beside her. She tilted her head, starting to smile,"Elf!," then looked down in confusion as a cup was ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Okayy...this is an interesting start. Certainly a powerfu

Hi WrenZorya, Mailice here with a short review! :D That's an interesting idea you've shown here and I was happy to take part in it. I liked the fact that ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : This is off to a decent start I ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, It’s a dark room, it’s ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : this was a mixed sort of start. Its ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : I loved the way that you handled this ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : This was a very interesting piece here. Its ...

Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! Forgot to mention it in the last part but it's pretty great that the drone has managed to capture all the intricate details ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Wow, I guessed it right! *Flashes a wide smile* So, no more danger of the aliens except the slight suspect of the transport system. ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Things definitely made some progress here in terms of both structure and the story, especially with the inclusion of the dialogues. However, I will ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Okay, that was definitely a great cliffhanger at the end of this part. Anyway, to the review. The previous parts were definitely a lot ...

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