Hey, there! Just here to review. "Suddenly Elsa felt dizzy and disoriented. Her legs wouldn't hold her up and she collapsed onto the ground. She tried to push herself up, ...

A queen? and the master mind uncovered.

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, He's perfect. THe perfect man ...

Eeeee this story is so cool! I’m already shipping Valentin and Cypress lol. I wonder what kind of adventures they’ll go on and how Naomi feels about being a magical ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, The Street lights flickered on ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, I awoke to the wonderful ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : This is quite the piece here. For something ...

True Angel re-write

Hey there! Lim here with a review. Since you’ve posted 10 poems here, which is a lot to get through at once, I’ll only be able to review 2 in ...

"You were a breath of fresh air" this line was just-well done, really explaining how the author relied on comfort from this person (if that is what you meant), now ...

Wow, this was (and is) an absolute master-piece! I liked the way you started off the story by giving a concept of the "urban legend" giving the story a sense ...

Under the broken stars, I breathe in One more burst of light. Colors whirl like apocalyptic galaxies, hurling shards from across the night. I closed my eyes and saw dulled ...

Red Forest cw: blood The blood in the forest falls in fall indefinite. Drops drip down dark branches and trunks, seep through grooves I've pulled with claws. I have to ...

Hey there FireSpyGirl!! Here for a quick little review! You've got quite a piece here, very descriptive, emotional, and relatable. Thank you for sharing such a piece with us. Alright ...

Hey there ValD!! Here for a quick review/comment! Ok, first of all, amazing job with this story, I can really see the time and effort you have put into this ...

Ooh I noticed their pin :) Very nice