Wow. God damn, that hit hard. I love this poem, the falling and rising and sinking art. One critique is I felt like this would have hit harder if you ...

Hi vamp! I noticed you have a number of stories in the Green Room and in honour of this Spring Cleaning event I'm popping by to hopefully review a chunk ...

I like the humor of this work, especially, "Should I write crap. they'd chuck lightning". That had me rolling. I like the simplicity of this work. No big words, it ...

Siren pays off debt and runs into a familiar face.

a supernova shatters into a million shards of starry skies

Right, last chapter and now I'm up to date! I'm not sure if you've written more of this yet, but please feel free to tag me when you post it. ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, I don’t like to chop ...

Hello I'm back for more! (apologies for all the notifs you're gonna get from me, haha xD) I really like that we've got some background on Fernando, although I wonder ...

Another quick one before we get back to green room reviewing! It's interesting how Alex remembers the game now, vs how he thought about it in the flashback last chapter. ...

Hello I have returned! Just a short one on this chapter so I can focus on ones you haven't got multiple reviews on but I'll share some thoughts as I ...

9/10. Obviously some of this could be better explained if I had more context but I throughly enjoyed the description. I can feel some real power behind some of the ...

In which Charax and Malia split

If Ren (Mutant Families) was younger, he'd probably be friends with someone like Blackie (from Graham Greene's The Destructors) or Ralph (from William Golding's Lord of the Flies). Ren is ...

Week 16 LSS Submission Death From The Depths 3021

(Continued) "This isn't the first time I've had people looking for me," Lisa said carelessly. "If we disguise the ship well enough, I can easily sneak into whatever city we ...

Short but important post + log submission both done. Excited for next week!