Hey there! Plume here, with a review! Ooh, what a fun chapter!! I loved all the explanation we got, and I really enjoyed the return of Jade. I'm left wondering ...

Matt talks to Charlie about why he was really hired and has a dream

Andrew back here for a review. The calmness of this chapter is good, it's definitely going to help us build towards more action, the stargazing seems like a way to ...

Hey Harry! RandomTalks here with a review! I really liked the fact that you extended this part a little longer than the usual ones. The most difficult part other than ...

oooooh the good emotions are continued here Andrew here with a review! I know it's been a while, but umm, gottt really busy, and started The Brother Karamazov, which for ...

takes place before ashe's story in "this broken world" (prev. code: delete). i wouldn't call it a chapter, but it has the potential for it

Hello! Wallflower here with a quick review (: My first impression of this poem was being blown away by its beauty. It's incredibly unique in the story it tells, the ...

in here today!

Hey there! Otterpop here with a review! This first chapter here was a very interesting one, I do find interest in stories that push you straight into the action without ...

…oh my goodness, I completely forgot about this.

Oki!! :D

Cute and creepy! I had such a kick reading this little poem.It’s a nice thing to read for Halloween.I also like the question at the end,addressing the readers.”Who will be ...

Hi felistia, Mailice here with a short review! A little later than planned, but here I am. :D Let's start right away. It was a short but very intense chapter. ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Okayy....well, this started off strong and tapered off ...

Check this out guys! I'm really trying to improve my art, so here's a little something I hid in the drawing I'm working on, it's not finished yet, but I ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : This is an interesting piece here. The premise ...