The fluid desert ended at the mountain.

It didn't take being the deity of secrets for Raz to feel the thrum of anxiety in the air. The news had spread so quickly through the castle it was ...

I really like the story so far. I will 100% be keeping up with it. I like the description and language you used. I can't notice any issues, so if ...

@vampricone6783 -- added!

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, I look before me now ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, Me. I am being thrown ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, Adrenaline. It’s coursing through my ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Ahh I loved the little show that we ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, Snow fell in tiny silver ...

Hi! I got hooked into this with the first line! I love the description and the detail. It was going smoothly until I saw this part: It was the summer ...

I was far more interested in figuring out what this jar was and if Skull could still be stuffed into it but I decided not to bring that up. absolutely ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : I am so far loving the way this ...

I really like this! I like how it shows the little cursor at the end because it seems like there's more to be said or maybe she's scared to say ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, Annie Arballo stood knee deep ...

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I really felt what Elijah was going through in the beginning, and SeaSalt was so cute. I do want to say that you should watch your spacing of words. There ...