Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for violence.
*This fanfic is underneath my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under this forum: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=116005&start=1065. This part is part of a series of my interpretation of the Creepypasta character, Jason the Toymaker’s, story. The little girl is in the story but she has no name so I gave her one. Jason the Toymaker was created by Krisantyl. Anyway, enjoy!*
Jason turned to look at Mr. Glutten, the gigantic purple stuffed worm that lay dormant on the ground. It scared most children who walked in his shop, even though Jason thought that it was the most adorable out of all of his creations.
He let Branwen’s body fall to the ground and picked up Mr. Glutten, placing him on the wooden table.
Jason’s heart raced as he grabbed Branwen’s body and pushed her into the mouth of Mr. Glutten.
For a little girl, she was quite heavy. Jason found himself panting and heaving as he tried to carefully hide her body. Not only that, but she was leaving a considerable amount of blood behind. He’d have to spend the entire night cleaning it up. He couldn’t leave Branwen’s body inside of Mr. Glutten forever, or else the shop would stink. He had to do something else.
Even in death, Branwen was being difficult. But at least Jason had a plan.
At least he hid her entirely in Mr. Glutten.
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These connect to this!
@Ravena I think you would like to read this. /|\
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Hi creeper! Dropping in for a review :3
Wow! This was so chilling! The juxtaposition of a child hiding the dead body of another child in a toy is dystopian and frightening in the best way. Something so innocent and childlike being turned into something so grotesque and violent. The fact that Jason is being so blase about it is also a wonderful touch. He feels no amount of remorse, or guilt, he's not even that worried about the consequences. He considers them in a practical aspect, but really, it looks like he couldn't be bothered.
Another nuance I really like is that since Jason and Branwen are both children, you can make the assumption that it's possible that Branwen didn't do anything that would, in any measure, justify her being killed and so brutally dealt with. Which means that Jason is committing a really horrifying of murder for which he can plead no defence. His character has no redeeming quality here.
Overall this was well written, I enjoyed reading it! Happy review day!!!
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Ah, Jason is an adult in this fic, but he acts and thinks very much like a child.
Thx for reading!
I’ll continue following this folder for now. And also! For Violet Victory!
I remember Branwen. She was kinda annoying and then Jason snapped. Yes. Yes.
Oha, he is just gonna…stuff her into his toys. I guess this is where the name comes from. And also the “craft” part he keeps mentioning abt all the child murdering he does. Why do I hear “remnant….” In MatPat’s voice now?
I just… I cant LOL “Even in death, Branwen was being difficult.” Suuuure buddy!
I find the last sentence is pretty weak compared to the rest of the story.