Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for language and violence.
*This is a fanfic of the Creepypasta “Nina the Killer” created by Alegotic-twevel. Claudia is a character that was in the original story! Jeff the Killer is in this story too and he was created by GameFuelTV. Laughing Jack is in this as well and he was created by Snuffbomb. Alyssa is my OC. This fanfic is under my folder “Creepypasta stuff”. Character designs are under this forum: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=116005&start=1080. Enjoy!*
Nina scribbled down answers as best as she could for her homework, only half paying attention to what she was actually writing. There was just a lot of homework and as much as she tried, she couldn’t get Alyssa’s strange behavior out of her mind.
Why did she slice Claudia’s arm? And she doesn’t seem to care? What if she hurts me? What if-
“Nina, what are you doing?” A man’s voice asked behind her.
Nina froze. She knew that grating, yet soft voice. She heard it telling her to “Go to sleep” a few nights before. But what was he even asking her about?
“I’m…doing homework?” Nina said, turning around to face Jeff. She couldn’t see him that well in the dark, but in the afternoon light, she could.
Jeff sat on her bed, in a hoodie almost as white as his skin. His ripped jeans were stained with blood, as was his hoodie and the tips of his long, greasy black hair. His black-lace up boots were stained with mud and dirt, just like his cracked fingernails, one hand clenching the handle of a dirty, bloodstained knife. The scars of his Glasgow smile was so, so deep that Nina thought she saw flies and spiders crawling in and out of it. His eyes were white and pupil-less, yet they seemed to hold a hint of confusion.
He was absolutely disgusting and yet, it made him all the more beautiful.
“Homework? Nina, I thought you wanted to be like me.” Jeff said, shaking his head.
No! Nina’s heart sunk as the disappointment in his voice coursed all around her. It was bad enough that most people in her life didn’t seem to understand her, but Jeff too?! No, he had to understand her, he was the one who mattered the most!
“I do! It’s just that I have work to do and not enough time to ki-“
“To kill? There’s always time to kill people. You just have to make that happen. Like Alyssa did.”
“You know Alyssa?”
Jeff nodded.
“I know that she already killed a child’s pet and a teenage boy. She’s two steps, no, THREE steps ahead of you, if you count what she did with Claudia. By the way, you shouldn’t be scared of what Alyssa did. She was doing what was best for her and Laughing Jack. Blood has to be spread for us.”
But if Jeff knew about that, then why wasn’t Alyssa a proxy yet?
“How do you know about that?” Nina asked, not sure if she wanted to ask any more questions at the moment.
“I watch when I need to. Now, throw that shit out. Creepypastas don’t do their homework.”
“But-“
“Don’t worry about school or what others will say. You want to be one of us, right? Homework is a waste of time. Time that could be used to think of murder. You won’t have to worry about it anymore if you do what I say.”
“But-Jeff!”
Jeff blinked out so fast, not leaving any trace that he was around, leaving Nina with her worksheets and a sense of hollowness that went deep in her heart.
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These chapters connect to this!:
@Ravena I think you might want to see this.
Two cursed young girls: Part One (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) [Chapter One: Car Ride]
Two cursed young girls: Part One (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) [Chapter Two: New house, old friends]
Two cursed young girls: Part One (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) [Chapter Three: Dinner thoughts]
Two cursed young girls:Part One (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) [Chapter Four: Sleep?]
Two cursed young girls: Part One [Nina Alexandria Hopkins) [Chapter Five: School]
Two cursed young girls: Part One (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) [Chapter Six: Odd individuals]
Two cursed young girls: Part One (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) [Chapter Seven: Creatures creeping]
Chapter Eight: Losses and lurkings (Part One) [Nina Alexandria Hopkins]
Two cursed young girls: Part One [Chapter Nine] [Nina Alexandria Hopkins]
Awesome! Thank you!
Yw!
Must admit, I am a bit lost on where in the folder we are so I just continue with this story for now. And also: For Violet Victory!

Ah Nina. I remember her.
Was this meant to be in italics? “Nina, what are you doing?”
…yes it was. Sorry for doubting you XD
Well at least she managed to summon him, huh? Tho I kinda like the juxtaposition of her kinda being disgusted by the scars but also calling him the most beautiful thing in the world in basically the same breath =D
Ohhh and there we go, he just casually name-drops Alyssa. I doubt Nina will take that well. Also just… “there is always time to kill” What a sentence XD
I can see how the creepypastas recruit their followers. No more homework? No more school? No wonder! They literally lose the ability to educate themselves against this. And creepypastas seem to have this weird magic around them that make them unimportant to government institutions… Nina never stood a chance. And worse: she doesn’t even realise she lost her moral compass, doesn’t even realise that this is a bad thing…