Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for violence.
This fanfic song/poem is under my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under this forum: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=116005&start=1080. I’ll tell you what it’s about in the comment linked, but anyway, I hope you enjoy!*
My nose is a cone
My skin is wrinkly white
My favorite shine is from a knife
Prom is next week
My date thinks my home is bleak
The rusted-up carnival is a family retreat
Somebody I know puts people to sleep
My laugh is jolly as a clown’s
My smile won’t get you down
In my house, we cannot frown
We keep our secrets safe and sound
My dresses are always chic
But my room’s not very neat
The basement downstairs
Stinks of rotting meat
The stories of my parents
Are laid out in computers
Teenagers read them and get moodier
I’m just like you if you ignore my oddities
I’ll never tell of my parents’ atrocities
Good things don’t always come in threes
Because when people see us, they give out quite the screams
Find out what this all means
And maybe I’ll save you from a bad dream
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Spoiler
It appears that the parents have arrived
When you have Creepypastas for parents
Janice literally almost gets kidnapped!
That fine fall morning! (Part one)
That fine fall morning! (Part Two)
That fine fall morning! (Part three)
That fine fall morning (part four) (last part!)
This time I noticed the rhyming scheme positively! I kinda rly got into the rhythm :3
See this is what I mean. As a poem, this kinda works even if it doesn’t rly have a plot.
*reads the spoiler* Oh I had a feeling this is abt Janice. Just bc she talks abt having a house and that her parents are on the internet!
I wonder what she means that she will save us from a bad dream. Janice finding a moral compass, becoming the good creepypasta we deserve? =D
%u201CBad dream%u201D as in life, because that is how she sees life for humans. Sometimes herself.
Thx for reading!
Okay so I just read your comment at the bottom of this poem, and it said that this girl named Janice is the daughter of laughing Jack and Jeff the Killer! And I was like, omg that's really interesting and I can see elements of her parents in her as I read the poem. Since guys can't have kids (I think so... correct me if I'm wrong) but I think Janice is adopted by Jeff and Jack, which is kind of cool! Personally, Laughing Jack and Jeff aren't my favorite ship, but I think it works well with the poem. (My favorite ship is Jeff and EJ)
I really enjoyed your poem, and I will continue reading your creepypasta stories since I love creepypastas as well and because I love your content!
I%u2019m very glad you enjoyed!
Yes, if Janice were a human, she would be adopted. That%u2019s right. But she is, in fact, not. LJ and Jeff created her in a ritual involving blood, bones, and rotten candy. She quite literally crawled out of the dirt. That%u2019s how she was born. :>
And I like Jeff x EJ too! I%u2019m a multishipper. :> I ship Jeff with LJ and EJ and LJ with Jason, Jeff, and Emra. ^v^ There are different AUs I have of these ships.
Here is a Jeff x EJ poem I made back in October:
Late on Halloween night…
SHE WAS MADE OUT OD BLOOD BONES AND ROTTEN CANDY?! Now that is very interesting and kinda cool too!
thx!! I still gotta write the story but I%u2019ll tag you when I do. ^v^