Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for violence and mature content.
*This fanfic is my interpretation of something that actually happens in the origin story of the Creepypasta character “Jason the Toymaker”. He’s a Creepypasta character created by Krisantyl. You can google him if you want. Gacha Club character designs are under my forum titled “My character designs<33[2]”. Enjoy!*
“Give me a new doll! Mine is broken!” A small, whiny little girl’s voice demanded.
Jason sharply looked up from his newspaper. It was the same little girl from earlier. It was none other than Branwen.
It took him five hours for him to pick a doll that Branwen was satisfied with, and even then, she didn’t pay him. He didn’t bother chasing her for money, because by then, she had already tired him out.
But why was she coming back near closing time?
“Get out of my toy shop. We’re closing up.” Jason said, pulling out the keys from his desk and walking up to the door.
“But it’s brokennn! Give me a new one!” Branwen demanded, stomping her foot on the ground.
Jason sighed. She had that look in her eyes. The look all children got when they didn’t get what they wanted. The very reason he hated children, even though, as Amelia said, they were his “biggest buyers”.
From the way she was violently shaking, almost vibrating, from how her bottom lip quivered to the point where the saliva in her mouth was visible, Jason could sense an incoming temper tantrum.
“Alright. I’ll take that doll and find you another one.” Jason said, extending his hand out for the doll.
Branwen’s face returned to its not-as-horrifying normal state. She eagerly placed the doll in Jason’s hand and skipped off to look at the other toys on display.
But why did she want to give it away so quickly? And if it was broken, why did she want a new one? Wouldn’t she want to get her doll fixed?
Jason examined the doll closely. He clenched his fist around the doll’s body, his heart felt like it would backflip into the air.
The doll wasn’t broken. It was in mint condition, with sparkling glass eyes and wavy synthetic hair, every child’s dream.
“Do you take me for a fool?” Jason seethed, placing the doll gently back on the counter. Dolls somewhat looked like children, but unlike children, they were agreeable.
They were the only child-resembling things he cared about.
“What are you talking about?! I want a do-“
Jason didn’t let Branwen finish her sentence. His hands were clenched around her neck, his nails digging deep into her skin.
“You wasted most of my morning on dolls, you didn’t pay me, and now, now you want to take another doll! I make these toys with my bare hands! I spend years crafting them myself, and you don’t give a single damn!” Jason cried out.
Her brown eyes bulged from her sockets, as though they wanted to ooze onto the ground. Jason beamed, the sounds of Branwen’s gasps for breath almost as beautiful as the music box he made for Amelia.
He worked so hard, and he wasn’t going to let all flow down to the drain because of her.
Jason clenched onto her neck tighter, tighter, tighter, until…
Until she went limp. Until she couldn’t breathe anymore.
And just as quickly as it rushed in, it all rushed back out.
He murdered a child. People would ask questions. He might go to jail. He might never be able to work again.
Jason hastily grabbed Branwen’s body as he tried to come up with a solution for his problem.
What was he going to do?
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This fanfic is under my folder “Creepypasta stuff”. The little girl in the original story also did not have a name. I gave her one.
Love the introductory line. Gets one right into the story!
I love it!I like what it says about Jason that he's willing to spend 5 hours on a girl who didn't pay him! Although he does say that it's just bc she tired him out. He doesn't seem all that bothered about her showing back up.
Ohhh that line:
Kinda feels like the little girl really awoke a sleeping, but very vicious dragon!
In this case, I really like the throwaway line about Amelia. Because it doesn't clutter the story and instead shows that Jason actually does have other people he does things for!
I wonder if his ingenious solution to his spontaneous murder problem might be... making her into a doll? After all, then she'd be very agreeable indeed!
hmm...yes...Jason might do that...
if you are interested in reading more, you can check my reply to the previous comment! :}
thx for reading!
Okay, correct me if I'm wrong, but is this a Jason the Toymaker, creepypasta fanfiction? I've always been a fan of Jason (Laughing jack is my soulmate, so suck up Jill) and I really enjoyed this story. I do have some theories, however.
Maybe your story takes place before Jason starts murdering and manipulating children. He was just an ordinary man, with an ordinary life, until this situation with the little girl, makes him turn demonic.
Just a theory.
''Dolls somewhat looked like children, but unlike children, they were agreeable.''
Can't agree with that more. I rather deal with animals and toys than with actual human beings.
'' The very reason he hated children,''
I can tell this guy doesn't like kids. He DESPISES THEM!
Great work dude/duddete!
You are correct. This IS Jason the Toymaker!!!
And I actually ship Jason with LJ in some of my fanfics. I have written a little bit about Jill, but not a lot.
Would you like to see the other fanfics?
Of course!
Here they are!:
When Jason the Toymaker met Laughing Jack
Laughing Jack’s surprise for Jason the Toymaker
Laughing Jack and Jason the Toymaker’s wedding
Static radio love songs and toys with watchful eyes
🖤🎪 Laughing Jack’s love for Jason 🎪🖤
🕰️🧸 Jason’s love for Laughing Jack 🧸🕰️
When Amelia approached Jason
Don’t eat too much candy canes
Christmas at the Meyer’s
The rules at home
When Jason first visited Amelia
Jason talks to LJ about the possibility of…A CHILD?!
Two left feet (and yet he still loves me)
A good night’s sleep
When Laughing Jack met Jason the toymaker [Part One]
When Laughing Jack met Jason the toymaker [Part Two]
A beautiful dress for LJ
Jason watched closely
Laughing Jack meets Aeliana!
Raisa Accardi, such a sweet little thing
Jason’s big move
Watching them play
Jason hears about the child!
After the crash and fall
Laughing Jack and Aeliana talk about friendship
Raisa tries to play with the living children
Jason teaches Lucy a lesson
Laughing Jack and Aeliana’s trip to the carnival!
Raisa’s diary entry (4/17/1955)
Laughing Jack gives Aeliana a show!
Raisa’s diary entry (4/18/1955)
These fanfics are all in different timelines so I apologize if it%u2019s a lot.
Thank you!
You%u2019re welcome!