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Raisa’s diary entry (4/21/1955)

Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for violence.

*This fanfic is under my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under this forum: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=116005&start=1065. The main character in this fanfic is my OC, Raisa Accardi, who is the ship child of Laughing Jack (created by Snuffbomb) and Jason the Toymaker (created by Krisantyl.) This is from the Creepypasta fandom.  Raisa is eight years old. Anyway, I hope you enjoy!*

4/21/1955

Hello,

I’m sorry for not writing here for two days. I was very busy yesterday and the day before. Yesterday, I had to go to Cheryl’s house. I hate Cheryl. Cheryl always pulls my hair in class. I kept telling the teacher but she never did anything, so I told my parents and they said I had to go to her house and invite her to mine. They said they were going to “save her” and “make her good”.

I didn’t want to go to her house because I don’t want to see her as a doll, but they said I would never have to talk to her again if I listened. I did not want to do it but my fathers said if I didn’t then I would get this taken away, so I did.

I already know where she lives because she lives closer to school, so I went to her house with my clown Dad (who wore a human costume) and told her all about it. Normally I go by myself but I guess they both knew how much I hated her so one of them decided to come with me.

Cheryl agreed to come because she “liked the circus” and “wanted to see cool stuff”. I haven’t seen her all day today and my fathers won’t tell me where she is.

But the day before? I played with my dolls in the woods. We have the entire local woods as our backyard since we live a little bit further from everybody else, but not too far. I put my dolls next to the trees and ran around holding one of their hands. I was pretending that we all lived in a beautiful palace and we could all run until we had to fight a dragon or something.

We were all having fun laughing together until the doll I was holding said that he wanted to go home and I said “later” and then he said “No, my real home, not your home”.

I thought that was a mean thing to say because my fathers always make sure that the children feel happy in our house and because I play with them. They are my friends and they know how much we all like them, so when he said that, I told him he was wrong.

He started crying really loudly, which scared all of the small animals and made them run. He also made all of the other children cry which wasn’t nice because they were all feeling good until he said something. I tried telling him to stop but he wouldn’t listen, so I took him and the other dolls back home and then fed him to the giant purple worm called “Mr. Glutten” that my human-ish father made for all of the “bad children”.

He screamed but then he stopped. I didn’t want to do it, I don’t like hearing them scream, I just wish that he wasn’t rude.

I almost cried but stopped myself. My parents say that crying doesn’t help anything and that if I cry too much then I’ll just be weak and people will hurt me.

I was too angry and tired and sad to write in my diary the other days, but I’m okay now!

Goodbye,

Raisa.

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Stickied · creeperfeverdreams commented · Sun Jan 04, 2026 4:07 pm

@Ravena @kittycursed @thehoplessromantic I think you’ll want to check this out.

These are the other entries I made:

Raisa’s diary entry (4/17/1955)
Raisa’s diary entry (4/18/1955)

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Tikaya
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Tikaya wrote a review · Sat Feb 14, 2026 10:20 pm

Next entry! For Violet Victory!


…so she invited her bully…to her house… where here parents assure her they will make the bully “good”…. Uhm I have an inkling on where this is going…
And it sounds like Raisa also knows. And doesn’t approve. Not bc of the murder, mind you, but bc she doesn’t want her AS A DOLL. Ah the things you have to worry abt as a child of creepypastas…

I suppose a creepypasta child has nothing to fear in the forest. Everything probably flees from her for fear of triggering her dads…

And well there we have the sad child logic: the captured soul told me it wants to go home; it’s so entitled!
I like how she thinks abt it, bc it is so obvious she is in the wrong but this is her diary so she is oblivious to it all and continues to just… live on without learning anything. Aiaiaiai.

There’s the worm again. I wonder if it actually is semi-alive and eats the souls of the children or if it is just something like a time-out box for misbehaving dolls that will later be reclaimed after learning their lesson?

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The worm is somewhat alive. Through evil magic.

Thx for reading!

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kittycursed
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Hiya! Great work!

Firstly, a summary. Raisa is forced to go to an enemies house. her enemy, Cheryl, pulls her hair in class. Raisa complained about her, and now her fathers are making her turn Cheryl into a doll with them! having a flashback, and Raisa and her doll have an argument about whether the doll can go "Home", and where that is. Raisa gets offended, and the doll causes a ruckus, leading to her feeding him to Mr. Glutten. this makes Raisa upset, and stops her from writing but she's back now!

I enjoy how well Raisa jump-ropes the line of morality, caring for her dolls and for Cheryl, even almost crying for them, but still following her actions and her fathers.

I also like Mr. Glutten, he seems nice.

I have no constructive criticism for you, so good job on that!

all in all, great work! keep writing!

Yes! You got that well! She believes herself to be a good person but at the end of the day, she is just like her fathers and perhaps, she doesn%u2019t understand what %u201Cgood%u201D really is.

Thanks for reading!



I want to see people turn and writhe; make them feel things they cannot see and sometimes do not know.
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