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On Cigarettes and Limerence
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The Little Man
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The Lost Dragon 6.1
by soundofmind in Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure


Fields of Oak
by Aley in Poetry » Romantic


I Drank in the Light That Day
by Snazzy in Poetry » Narrative


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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction
    The Three Lockets [Chapter 4.1]

    Hi again, Sae! I'm catching up steadily. I'm going to be sad when I have to wait for this weekly like everyone else! Small Comments Lira brought them through the ...

    DarkPandemonium
    DarkPandemonium - 8 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction
    The Three Lockets [Chapter 3.4]

    Hiya, Saen! Small Comments Aspen quickly hobbled after Lira and Rodet, but Cass lingered behind their two guides . Unnecessary. Even if you decide to keep it, I'd swap 'their ...

    DarkPandemonium
    DarkPandemonium - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Literature, General
    Daylight Companion

    Salutations! You said you had written this poem a while ago and thought you'd share it; well, thanks for that! I enjoyed it, as it was simple and thought-provoking. I've ...

    AstralHunter
    AstralHunter - 2 hours ago

  • Forums » Writing Activities
    Describe your project with three nouns!

    " Out Side " Empathy, Grief, Parenthood.

    Tenyo
    Tenyo - 2 hours ago

  • Forums » Writing Activities
    Title Feedback [2]

    Sounds like a great title for a kids mystery novel. If I were looking for something with a decent amount of intrigue but still more light hearted than your average ...

    Tenyo
    Tenyo - 2 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Storybooks
    Masquerade Ball

    Masquerade Ball One party at a huge house, many people come. But you must have a mask, or a face mask on. Rules: -You cannot have names out, just call ...

    Bellarke
    Bellarke - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, Realistic
    When Noah met Kaeden

    Hi there! Welcome to YWS! We are happy to have you here and already contributing. I feel like you have already done some revision to the piece, and that's much ...

    Lavvie
    Lavvie - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, General
    Jerry

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that missed their 11 o'clock train years ago. First off, I think this is too short to be a short story, ...

    concord
    concord - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, General
    Running Away (better titles?)

    Hello there. Popping in to give a much-deserved review even if it somehow missed its train all those years ago. First off, I'm curious if there was a word count ...

    concord
    concord - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, General
    Some kind of Wonderful. 13+

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a much-deserved review after longer than a decade's wait. First off, I'm curious if you ever did something else with this, as I'm ...

    concord
    concord - 6 hours ago

  • Forums » Lounge, The
    What's your personality type?

    I got INFJ :D

    Clarity
    Clarity - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, General
    I Never Knew the History She Remembered

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that must have missed its stop all those years ago. First off, I'm curious by the fact that this reads as ...

    concord
    concord - 7 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Historical Fiction, Narrative
    My Diary - Young Sufragette

    Hi! I love that you wrote this in a diary format. It's unique and shows intimate little snippets of the character's mind and heart. So I have a few thoughts ...

    Jeni31
    Jeni31 - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Moonlight: Chapter Six

    Last one for now! Specifics 1. I'm not sure I understand Artemis' comment about huntresses - who does she mean? Maia and Peridot? Or some other people who aren't there? ...

    Rydia
    Rydia - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Before the Dragon - Chapter 3 (LMS IV)

    Yay, next one! Excited to see some development with the world and characters :-) **disclaimer: I will most likely focus on negative aspects more so than positive aspects when reviewing, ...

    elysian
    elysian - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Humor
    My Dad

    YAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS!!! OKAY SO FIRST OFF_ YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS GGGGGGIIIIIIIIRLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!! And there is lieterally nothing wrong with this.... I need

    Bellarke
    Bellarke - 8 hours ago


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