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The Literary Spotlight displays the five most popular new works over the past day as judged by the number of 'Likes' each has received in the past 24 hours.

Question
by KatyaElefant in Poetry » Humor


They Have to be Wrong
by Gravity in Short Story » Fantasy


She wrapped time around her neck like a rope
by Deanie in Poetry » Narrative


The Girl Who Wasn't There
by TheGirlNextDoor in Poetry » Lyrical


We
by LordGreenleaf in Poetry » General



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  • Reviews » Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    I Mourn the Loss of Innocence

    Hello, darling! First off, I really do like the idea behind this poem, but I think it could be fixed up with a bit of spit-and-polish as far as the ...

    Arkhaion
    Arkhaion - 4 minutes ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Lincoln Wood Private College Prep DT

    Ugh, sorry. I'll write today. I'm in holding all day tomorrow, so that should give me more time.

    Shiney
    Shiney - 20 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    She wrapped time around her neck like a rope

    "knowledge running like the crystalline Jamaican waterfalls" Not sure what this means could you explain this? I really like this! It is absolutely amazing.A lot of emotion in this. It ...

    Bambi
    Bambi - 55 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Historical Fiction, Culture
    Waiting for a Better Day

    Hello, darling! Let's start with the strong points of your poem. I really like your imagery— especially in the first line, it really draws the reader in with the "skin ...

    Arkhaion
    Arkhaion - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Humor, General
    I am Converting my Religion

    I might have found this funny if it wasn't quite so religiously offensive. Perhaps you didn't mean this, but a few sticking points for me: Buddhism and Hinduism—sorry, "Hinuism"—are quite ...

    Arkhaion
    Arkhaion - 2 hours ago

  • Poetry » Humor, General
    I am Converting my Religion

    Wanna convert with me?

    CaptainSaltWater
    CaptainSaltWater - 2 hours ago
    E - Everyone

  • Forums » Welcome Mat
    Why not, actually?

    Hi Lesley, welcome to the site! I'm glad you're finding the community friendly so far! There's a lot of areas to explore so if you're looking for anything in particular ...

    Rydia
    Rydia - 2 hours ago

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    I Mourn the Loss of Innocence

    Mourning the loss of innocence as one grows from childhood to be an adult.

    Biluata
    Biluata - 3 hours ago
    E - Everyone

  • Reviews » Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    The Cemetery of Green Firelights

    AHHHHHHHHH! That was the sound of me being blow away by this piece. A-hem. Now that that's out of my system, let's get to reviewing! ‘Visis? Kim Visis?’ I just ...

    Firelight
    Firelight - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, General
    Can you hear me?

    Hm, well I like this- I like the character you've created- but I think this is just a bunch of information, and not a story. Even the last bit at ...

    Satira
    Satira - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    I would write you a thousand poems...

    Hey hermione315. xJ here to review your work. Let's take this stanza by stanza and I'll list my nitpicks. Stanza 1: This stanza is fine, but I just don't like ...

    xJupiter
    xJupiter - 5 hours ago

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Dreamer - Chapter 3

    Chapter 3 of my Dreamer novel. Pleas read the previous chapters before reviewing. ^.^

    xJupiter
    xJupiter - 5 hours ago
    12+

  • Forums » Welcome Mat
    Hello! :)

    Hello there, newbie. Welcome to YWS. It's great to see you here. Well, it's a pretty cool introduction of yours. Do you write poems too? Well, I do and I ...

    donizback
    donizback - 6 hours ago

  • Forums » Welcome Mat
    New member here!

    Wecome to YWS, mate. Hope you have a great time here :)

    donizback
    donizback - 7 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    I would write you a thousand poems...

    Hello there! This is the first time that I've seen a poem with this kind of format. I mean the 'ambling' part. It's very creative of you to do that. ...

    PrinceofTerror
    PrinceofTerror - 7 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Cloak And Dagger DT

    @15253 If nobody's plannin' anything, I might actually post next. I have something in mind.

    Tortwag
    Tortwag - 7 hours ago