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by tgirly in Poetry » Lyrical


For Lareine
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The Giant
by felistia in Other » Realistic


I'm an emotional wreck
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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic
    Letting Go

    Hey! I'm here for a quick review. I'll start out by saying that the first paragraph was good and it did make me want to read on. It was very ...

    AdrianMoon
    AdrianMoon - 31 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    The Snow Queen (Part IV)

    -"Scott stood up suddenly and, as a consequence, got a mayor head rush." Scott stood up suddenly and got a major head rush. - she was des armed. disarmed - ...

    Dreamworx95
    Dreamworx95 - 35 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual
    A Shock Absorber's Story.

    This is Yams here for a review! My soul resides in the driver’s seat, But my heart’s inside four tires. What's the difference between a soul and a heart in ...

    Yams
    Yams - 45 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, Narrative
    Fields of Vision

    Hello! I really like the idea behind your poem! I like how you represent the biases of the different people as very different things: ashes and the sun. What is ...

    Picklesole
    Picklesole - 46 minutes ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Oceanside Academy for the... Eccentric DT

    Hey Lefty! :) @LeftyWriter

    HazelGrace16
    HazelGrace16 - 54 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, General
    nighttime admiration

    Hello. I feel like you're trying to go a little too big with this poem. You have a lot of overreaching feelings that feel like superlatives, which is the absolute ...

    Rosendorn
    Rosendorn - 1 hour ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Star Wars: Rise of the Legion DT

    @Kelpies - Sure, why not! :) I guess I'm waiting for @LordZeus' post, then it's time to go forward! Any ideas about how/why the Fidsmors would follow Anita to Myrkr? ...

    TinyJarStoredDreams
    TinyJarStoredDreams - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Humor, Dramatic
    My YWS Addiction

    Hello! I don't believe in perfection. Everything can always get better. That being said, this was pretty close to it. ;) The rhymes really enhanced the whole thing, and all ...

    SnazzyPencil
    SnazzyPencil - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    The Snow Queen (Part III)

    Hi Erika, I'm here to review your third chapter. -"Where the hell are all the doctors and nurses?! she wondered." Cut "she wondered" -"As she examined the small wound, a ...

    Dreamworx95
    Dreamworx95 - 2 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Genii - Land of the Gods DT

    Kk I'm up

    15253
    15253 - 2 hours ago

  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic
    Provenance Ludus

    The first short story of my collection of stories known as the Epic Xake. This is the first story of the first era and serves as a prologue.

    pdavinci
    pdavinci - 2 hours ago
    E - Everyone

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    PMD: Seventeen Plates DT 3

    Fine. I doubt they have internet in Montana anyway

    15253
    15253 - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy
    Introduction: Slipping Into Abyss

    Hey, pdavinci here to review you work. I saw the title of your work and became intrigued, it sounded very interesting. It also had no reviews so I thought I ...

    pdavinci
    pdavinci - 2 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » General Storybook Discussion
    A Storybook

    @Jhinx, fourteen people have already expressed their interest in this, so I think it's safe to say you can go ahead with your plans. ;) PS: I haven't forgotten about ...

    AstralHunter
    AstralHunter - 2 hours ago

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    To Think I Used To Be Your Savior

    Nothing lasts forever.

    TheSilverFox
    TheSilverFox - 2 hours ago
    16+ Violence

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Jedibook DT

    @Robusto, if you contact Admiral Ridley onboard the Eurydice, I'll your char up good. ;)

    Birkhoff
    Birkhoff - 3 hours ago


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
— Philip Pullman