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Literary Spotlight

when will you believe it for yourself?
by soundofmind in Poetry » General

a loss
by soundofmind in Poetry » General

"Lonely" and "Trusting"
by LJF in Poetry » Realistic

The Grateful Immigrant ​
by Radrook in Short Story » Dramatic

by Radrook in Poetry » Dramatic

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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General
    Conics Unfortunately: 49

    Ellipse finally comes up with the best method of foiling bounty hunters.

    Ventomology - 5 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Article / Essay » Literature, General
    Wordsmithing: The Comma Needs To Go! [Revised]

    Thanks for sharing this very thought-provoking essay. Your logic is very compelling since it repeatedly exposes the fallacy of inconsistency of policy. Why require something now and not then? Why ...

    Radrook - 8 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Chapter 1 of Princess of the Sea

    I happen to have read the original "The Little Mermaid" by Hans Christian Anderson several times, most recently just a few weeks ago, so I have a little more context ...

    LJF - 15 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, Action / Adventure
    Apples and cinnamon

    Hey there! Iggy coming at you with a review

    Iggy - 26 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Horror, Realistic
    I'm Leaving Home

    Hi DemonGoddess! Here is your review as promised. I think this story has a lot of potential. I was interested to see what you would do with it since this ...

    Elinor - 30 minutes ago

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural
    How Was Your Day? - Chapter 23.2

    Mrs. Bale is the best mom. Don't even argue.

    Querencia - 33 minutes ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Book Club in Room U202 DT

    Grav already asked me. They could be neighbors??? @Nike

    HazelGrace16 - 1 hour ago

  • Storyboooks » Storybooks
    Alter Egos

    "Your not threatening anyone. Now get over here for christ sake!" E.E spits while she finishes lakes wound.

    Flumadiddle - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Angel Wings and a Small Flame: Chapter 1

    This chapter struggles a lot with info-dump. In almost every situation, it is boring to read paragraphs of information, such as the one that started with, "Angels and humans coexisted ...

    Emberly - 1 hour ago

  • Storyboooks » Storybooks

    Chapter 3P: Over the Head Comes the Crown James laughed. It was booming and sharp, cutting through the ears of the others in the cave and competing with the howling ...

    TheSilverFox - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense
    Kimandra Loval Chapter one

    Thanks for sharing this fascinating introduction to to a novel. You did an excellent job in making the protagonist come to life by describing her physical appearance, her fears, the ...

    Radrook - 2 hours ago

  • Forums » Media Reviews
    Simon vs. the Homo Sapiens Agenda by Becky Albertalli

    To your question — no, it really didn’t bother me. But that might just be because I haven’t read those other books so I can’t compare exactly. I think scenes ...

    neptune - 3 hours ago

  • Forums » Writers Corner
    Story Conclusion Ideas

    If you were to ask me which one or ending I would prefer it would probably be the second as sad as it is I feel like you could do ...

    Chappiez - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Chapter 13 of Princess of the Sea

    Love it!! The part where you talked about Lord Tiernan and how he hated carriages was a tiny bit confusing. If it were me I would say something like the ...

    camusic - 3 hours ago

  • Forums » Media Reviews
    Give me you wand and will guess your personality

    Ash and unicorn, 14 and 1/2 inches, unyielding. Wow, you are one of the most loyal friends anyone could have. You never do anything half way, when you believe in ...

    DauntlessDagger - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Seltas's first kill

    Hey there friend, you requested a review - so here I am. :) I'm going to go through the piece and just point out a few areas that I had ...

    alliyah - 4 hours ago

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— Francis Bacon