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by Saen in Novel / Chapter » Fantasy


Re: Fall on deaf ears
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Re: Chapter 17.2: Gael
by Mea in Novel / Chapter » Fantasy


Re: Chapter 18.1 (Borders)
by Saen in Novel / Chapter » Fantasy


Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 35.2
by Saen in Novel / Chapter » Fantasy


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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Chapter 18.2

    Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Well, shoot. I was expecting Karikoff to go off and do something stupid after that woman was killed, but ...

    Saen
    Saen - 11 seconds ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    Fall on deaf ears

    Hi! I thought I'd have a look at this one too :) Line-by-line 1. Cute rhyming scheme - I especially like the half rhyme on the second line. 2. The ...

    Rydia
    Rydia - 5 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Chapter 17.2: Gael

    Hey Light! Back again. This is another great chapter. Both Gael and Veris' dialogue feels natural and in-character. I'm still slightly suspicious of Veris, but a lot less than I ...

    Mea
    Mea - 11 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Chapter 18.1 (Borders)

    Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. This chapter was really good. I'm not sure why I haven't realized it earlier, but some of the best ...

    Saen
    Saen - 12 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 35.2

    Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. "Edna. Seriously. You don't have to be all right all the time." She hiccuped and laughed and started crying ...

    Saen
    Saen - 27 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    The unstoppable cart

    Hi again! I have some time now so I thought I'd review a few of your poems :) Line-by-line 1. The line break is a little awkward between the first ...

    Rydia
    Rydia - 28 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 35.1

    Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Though I may say that I hate when characters lose their memories, I absolutely love when they're trying to ...

    Saen
    Saen - 35 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 34.2

    Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Your grammar was perfect in this chapter, so I'll focus on the other parts of it. The characters were ...

    Saen
    Saen - 44 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Love Is Another Lie

    Hi, that was a really nice one. I doted how it is so short but contains such a deep denotement. This poem of yours describes a person who does not ...

    vagrant
    vagrant - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural
    How Was Your Day? - Chapter 32.1

    Hiya, Querencia! I'll be glad to be up to date with this again. A little ways into his lunch period, where he sat picking at his bland food What kind ...

    DarkPandemonium
    DarkPandemonium - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic
    drug drama test intro

    Hi there! Bookish here with a quick review. Firstly, due to the subject matter I would have thought that perhaps an 18+ warning would have been more appropriate due to ...

    BookishBrook
    BookishBrook - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural
    How Was Your Day? - Chapter 31.2

    Hi, Querencia. Popping in for another review. Finnley remembered that he was about to laugh at her for listening to the radio Why? It's not that uncommon. Does he think ...

    DarkPandemonium
    DarkPandemonium - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Article / Essay » Politics, Politics
    Militancy and the Institutions

    This article was a very interesting read. I personally do not know very much about this issue and I feel it's shocking that much of the world is not aware ...

    BookishBrook
    BookishBrook - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, General
    the riptide, i.

    I love this! It's such a beautiful poem and it flows together so well. Firstly I love the way that the poem addresses the reader. It's so common that poems ...

    BookishBrook
    BookishBrook - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural
    How Was Your Day? - Chapter 31.1

    Hiya, Querencia! Happy Review Day! At the very least, I'm going to use today to get up to date with your lovely novel. Still, the after-school punishment was more tedious ...

    DarkPandemonium
    DarkPandemonium - 3 hours ago


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