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The Wonders of My Garden
by TheBlueCat in Poetry » Fantasy


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  • Reviews » Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy
    Girl of Fire and Brimstone (Part 1)

    Hi there! Wow, I loved the narrative voice in this, although I agree with Drac that the story-starter sentences toward the end were used too frequently and got repetitive. I ...

    BlueAfrica
    BlueAfrica - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Article / Essay » Other, Realistic
    The Progressive Era

    Hi there! You've got a lot of important details about the Progressive Era in this essay, and I like that they're all related - you focus on safety in the ...

    BlueAfrica
    BlueAfrica - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Action / Adventure
    Que Sera Sera Chapter 14

    Hi, Dragon! Nitpicks “You want us to destroy a lab. Why use ten words where one will do?” Fox said, almost with annoyance. “ Moving on , will you be ...

    DarkPandemonium
    DarkPandemonium - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural
    From State to State: 3.1

    The fact of the matter is that most of the wizards in the plains states believe in clean magic and no killing and pretty neutral. 100% for certain I am ...

    BlueAfrica
    BlueAfrica - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy
    Girl of Fire and Brimstone (Part 1)

    Ahoy there, AliceinBluue! :P I'm here to review. The noticing comes later. I really liked the narrator's voice. This off-hand remark was my favourite. It's great how you gave it ...

    Dracula
    Dracula - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural
    From State to State: 3.1

    Ahhhh slight After Watch panic. Nit-picks and nice moments: My quite fabulous choice was to bring Bilbo and Gandalf to this world, much to the chagrin of the Mirkwood elves ...

    BiscuitsLeGuin
    BiscuitsLeGuin - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic
    Realms; Dark Times Follow

    Hey Kira! I thought I'd drop by and review this today. I like your philosophical opening and the introduction of the Kings by this unknown narrator, particularly how he/she is ...

    Mea
    Mea - 2 hours ago

  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy
    Girl of Fire and Brimstone (Part 1)

    Once upon a time, there was a girl of fire and brimstone.

    AliceinBluue
    AliceinBluue - 3 hours ago
    E - Everyone

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    The Boy With The Red Hair

    Hello hmgc!!! Alice stopping by for a quick review! First the good! I really like the story you have going on in this poem! Someone who has been kept in ...

    AliceinBluue
    AliceinBluue - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic
    get back up

    Wow, this is amazing. I really like the style of the poem, it is simply brilliant. The short stanzas and lines make it really easy to understand what the narrator ...

    AliceinBluue
    AliceinBluue - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, General
    Wasted

    Hey, RainaDee. :D I'm here to share some thoughts on this poem. In the first stanza, you sort of say the phrases backward (hopes crushed instead of crushed hopes, etc) ...

    Dracula
    Dracula - 7 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    The Outlands [DT]

    Thanks, sound! I like how on my profile page it looks like Artie's holding up my username xD How's life for you?

    Wolfical
    Wolfical - 8 hours ago

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    the feeling of nothingness (edited)

    edited poem

    Gooseluck
    Gooseluck - 9 hours ago
    E - Everyone

  • Poetry » General, General
    The Boy With The Red Hair

    About a boy with red hair

    hmcg
    hmcg - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, General
    Go Green

    I'm new to this and honestly don't know what I'm doing so I'm sorry if I say something wrong . The poem was great, it provided an amazing description with ...

    LostShadow
    LostShadow - 9 hours ago

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Wasted

    I suck at romance and I feel this is cliche, but, hey, I wrote it, so yeah... Please be gentle, this is my first romanticish piece.

    RainaDee
    RainaDee - 10 hours ago
    12+


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