Young Writers Society

Hey there Rebel! I'm currently working through some of the less loved works in the Green Room so I thought I would stop by here for a review! I'm not ...

ahh Laughing Jack is back! Izora and Davorin were only walking together, thinking of things to do, when a voice asked behind them I'd like some more characterisation of Izora ...

Hey there Toast! I've not reviewed any of this story before, but I had a quick skim of the first two chapters so I think I understand the premise. One ...

Ok I'm back for some more! Going to stick with a couple of comments max for each piece because it's pretty long but as always let me know if you're ...

Hello hello! I see we've got a couple of chapters of book 2 already, I'm amazed at the speed with which you've managed to get these out because I'd definitely ...

Hey there diabloo, Icy here for a review today! I'm interested in how your technique has shifted throughout writing this, to the point that the style in the end is ...

Ok, jumping around a bit again but I think this is the last chapter you've posted before editing so hopefully I can be a bit more structure with feedback once ...

Hello hello hello, I'm back for another review! This one is pretty long, so I probably won't comment on every single part or I'll be here for hours. Maybe he ...

Hey again Alwaysea, Icy here again for another review today! I like the theme behind this, and I'm interested in the fact that you used third person but chose not ...

Hey there Koco! I haven't caught the first two chapters of this but saw this one in the Green Room so I thought I'd swing by for a quick review ...

Congrats!!

Collabed with @ScarlettFire The back room was about half the size of the office. It was filled with filing cabinets, some with papers spilling out of them haphazardly. Amber idly ...

Should be able to do things during initiation. My profile is basically done, just needs a little adjustment so that shouldn't take as long~

roots seek out our hands roots ground our feet. we're still here pointlessly yelling

In this world, everyone learns how to fight and use their inherent magic to defend themselves from the soulless. For all life in this world, magic is life and all ...

YAY