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Literary Spotlight

when will you believe it for yourself?
by soundofmind in Poetry » General


a loss
by soundofmind in Poetry » General


"Lonely" and "Trusting"
by LJF in Poetry » Realistic


The Grateful Immigrant ​
by Radrook in Short Story » Dramatic


​Wings
by Radrook in Poetry » Dramatic


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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General
    Conics Unfortunately: 49

    Ellipse finally comes up with the best method of foiling bounty hunters.

    Ventomology
    Ventomology - 5 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Article / Essay » Literature, General
    Wordsmithing: The Comma Needs To Go! [Revised]

    Thanks for sharing this very thought-provoking essay. Your logic is very compelling since it repeatedly exposes the fallacy of inconsistency of policy. Why require something now and not then? Why ...

    Radrook
    Radrook - 8 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Chapter 1 of Princess of the Sea

    I happen to have read the original "The Little Mermaid" by Hans Christian Anderson several times, most recently just a few weeks ago, so I have a little more context ...

    LJF
    LJF - 15 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, Action / Adventure
    Apples and cinnamon

    Hey there! Iggy coming at you with a review

    Iggy
    Iggy - 26 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Horror, Realistic
    I'm Leaving Home

    Hi DemonGoddess! Here is your review as promised. I think this story has a lot of potential. I was interested to see what you would do with it since this ...

    Elinor
    Elinor - 30 minutes ago

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural
    How Was Your Day? - Chapter 23.2

    Mrs. Bale is the best mom. Don't even argue.

    Querencia
    Querencia - 33 minutes ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Book Club in Room U202 DT

    Grav already asked me. They could be neighbors??? @Nike

    HazelGrace16
    HazelGrace16 - 1 hour ago

  • Storyboooks » Storybooks
    Alter Egos

    "Your not threatening anyone. Now get over here for christ sake!" E.E spits while she finishes lakes wound.

    Flumadiddle
    Flumadiddle - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Angel Wings and a Small Flame: Chapter 1

    This chapter struggles a lot with info-dump. In almost every situation, it is boring to read paragraphs of information, such as the one that started with, "Angels and humans coexisted ...

    Emberly
    Emberly - 1 hour ago

  • Storyboooks » Storybooks
    Mana

    Chapter 3P: Over the Head Comes the Crown James laughed. It was booming and sharp, cutting through the ears of the others in the cave and competing with the howling ...

    TheSilverFox
    TheSilverFox - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense
    Kimandra Loval Chapter one

    Thanks for sharing this fascinating introduction to to a novel. You did an excellent job in making the protagonist come to life by describing her physical appearance, her fears, the ...

    Radrook
    Radrook - 2 hours ago

  • Forums » Media Reviews
    Simon vs. the Homo Sapiens Agenda by Becky Albertalli

    To your question — no, it really didn’t bother me. But that might just be because I haven’t read those other books so I can’t compare exactly. I think scenes ...

    neptune
    neptune - 3 hours ago

  • Forums » Writers Corner
    Story Conclusion Ideas

    If you were to ask me which one or ending I would prefer it would probably be the second as sad as it is I feel like you could do ...

    Chappiez
    Chappiez - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Chapter 13 of Princess of the Sea

    Love it!! The part where you talked about Lord Tiernan and how he hated carriages was a tiny bit confusing. If it were me I would say something like the ...

    camusic
    camusic - 3 hours ago

  • Forums » Media Reviews
    Give me you wand and will guess your personality

    Ash and unicorn, 14 and 1/2 inches, unyielding. Wow, you are one of the most loyal friends anyone could have. You never do anything half way, when you believe in ...

    DauntlessDagger
    DauntlessDagger - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Seltas's first kill

    Hey there friend, you requested a review - so here I am. :) I'm going to go through the piece and just point out a few areas that I had ...

    alliyah
    alliyah - 4 hours ago


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