
*This fanfic is underneath my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under my forum titled “My character designs<33[2]”. Nina the Killer is a Creepypasta created Alegotic-twevel. Jeff the Killer is a Creepypasta created by GameFuelTV. Zoe and Sienna were created by me. I read somewhere on Nina’s wiki page that “she was normal until the two best friends died” and I don’t know if someone made that up or if she actually had two best friends before she became a Creepypasta because I don’t remember reading about them in her origin story, so I made Zoe and Sienna. The way Nina tries to summon Jeff is something I found from Wattpad, btw. Anyway, enjoy!*
Nina lay in bed, the butter knife on her nightstand, staring at the pale moon outside her window.
The moon was pale like Jeff’s skin, but why didn’t he come? She had done exactly what she was supposed to do to summon Jeff, but he didn’t show up. Her friends, Sienna and Zoe, were around as witnesses, with Sienna recording, but absolutely nothing happened!
Tears stained her eyes as she thought about the possibility that Jeff didn’t exist, that he wouldn’t be there to change her, to make her better, to make her grow as a creature of something more, something that wouldn’t get bullied, something that would make her better than everyone else.
She wanted so badly for him to be real, but if he wasn’t, then…
She’d have to be content with him as a fictional character. It felt like her heart was pulled out of her ribcage, like she was completely betrayed, but she’d be okay…right?
Right?
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Hello hello!
So she's been mistreated and is seeking Jack's help to transform her into something supernatural and powerful. I appreciate this little reminder of her motivation.
Just like he is for us! ...right?? o.o
As always, I'm amazed by the complexity of the creeper universe and how all these different stories and characters interact with each other. I don't think I've read about Nina before, but I definitely know about Laughing Jack from your other stories!
I love how you saw a missing piece in the lore with Nina's two friends and you decided to create two new OCs to fill those roles.
Until next time!
Wolfi
thank you! and Nina does not want to summon LJ, but Jeff the Killer. HOWEVER, LJ will appear in the fanfic chapters I posted. She's going to sort of befriend a girl her age who is obsessed with LJ the way Nina is obsessed with Jeff.
thx for reading!
OOPS haha I think I saw his name on the sidebar and got them switched in my head
it's fine. I talk about him so much that he must have infiltrated your mind.
Oh I am a bit worried by the title. Does Nina fail yet again? Last time it sounded like it cost her friends’ lives…
Ah never mind, it’s right after the failed summoning, so the aftermath.
I know it’s kinda deranged but you describe her emotional state so well I rly feel for her. I also really like how you describe the moon here 😊
It feels very grounded, this snippet.