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Snoink
12 hours ago
Omni, Dossereana, EsmerayaRose, BluesClues, FireEyes, Meshugenah, Spearmint, Lael, winterwolf0100, tatteredbones, EternalRain, Seirre, Mageheart

... for posterity!!!!

Chickens and Penguins!!!! TOGETHER IN HARMONY!!!!!!

... what an absolutely beautiful sentiment.

DreamyAlice We want bats as well!!! @SantaYWS do something, please!!
12 hours ago

Snoink DON'T RUIN THE MOMENT.
12 hours ago

DreamyAlice I WILL.
12 hours ago

lliyah Beautiful 😍
11 hours ago

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Snoink
14 hours ago
Seirre, Dossereana, winterwolf0100, EsmerayaRose, BluesClues, Spearmint, Lael, lliyah, tatteredbones, Mageheart

... gonna boost this poem in honor of @TheEgg being our new featured member.
lliyah wrote:Belated poem regarding our friendship. #freindshippoems

The Egg, how marvelous you are!
You, fighter of classified schemes,
protector of young writers,
unifying mascot we salute,
and vow to support your plans.

You, pre-chicken and full of life,
full of hope about to hatch
eternally a promise of potential,
what thoughts do you think
as you wait, oh if only we could
spy within your mysterious shell.

The Egg, controversy sometimes
surrounds your call - as people confused
try to defeat the site with mayhem plans.
But worry not Egg! Worry not!
Your loyal supporters of the #unclassified crew
stand firm, along with Big Bro, and
throughout the land none can boast
more genuine likes than you.

Thanks Egg! Here's a link to the legendary egg post for more people to like as it has now garnered 100 + likes after years of your good work. :]

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Snoink
Mar 30, 2023
Dossereana, EsmerayaRose, BluesClues, winterwolf0100, tatteredbones, Omni, Mageheart, Spearmint

This... chapter is not going the way that I expected it to.

Lyda is a force of nature.
Snoink
Mar 29, 2023
Plume, Dossereana, FireEyes, Seirre, winterwolf0100, LadySpark, lliyah, Mageheart, Lael, EsmerayaRose, Que, Ari11, Carlito, tatteredbones, LuxLuthor, Omni

Working on chicken wings today and thinking about Matthew, who made a bunch of stitch locks for me this Valentines Day... <3

Lael Those are super cute! Are they 3D printed?
Mar 29, 2023

Snoink Yes, he 3d printed them. they have little hearts on them too.
Mar 30, 2023

Lael I saw!! That is a really sweet touch.
Mar 30, 2023

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Snoink
Mar 28, 2023
tatteredbones, Nate, Que, Dossereana, Spearmint, Mageheart, Horisun, Seirre, winterwolf0100, BluesClues, LuxLuthor

... does anyone have a work they would like me to review? Post a link!
Nate wrote:Small request: March 2023 is currently running only 41 reviews behind March 2022 with a little more than three days to go. So, giving these out on a first-come, first-serve basis:

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Snoink
Mar 28, 2023
BluesClues, tatteredbones, winterwolf0100, Dossereana, Que, Spearmint, Mageheart, ShpidderMon, LuxLuthor, Carlito

So. I was mindlessly scrolling Facebook and THEN I SAW CYRUS.

... or at least Fionn Whitehead playing Pip in BBC's new rendition of Great Expectations.

But no, seriously! It's Cyrus!!!

I...

Snoink (Don't mind me. I am just internally screaming here because EEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!)
Mar 28, 2023
Snoink
Mar 28, 2023
tatteredbones, LuxLuthor, IcyFlame, Omni, PaigeFantasy, Mageheart, FireEyes, Dossereana, Seirre, BluesClues, winterwolf0100, Carlito, Spearmint

*writes another wedding scene and cackles maniacally*

PaigeFantasy woah
Mar 28, 2023
Snoink
Mar 28, 2023
EsmerayaRose, Horisun, FireEyes, LuxLuthor, Lael, Seirre, Que, BluesClues, Euphory, winterwolf0100, tatteredbones, GengarIsBestBoy, Mageheart, Dossereana, Meshugenah, Spearmint

My sick brain decided that last night I needed to dream about my Swans story with... Paw Patrol coming to the rescue.

So now I have to grudgingly admit that the dogs in Paw Patrol are more competent than my characters.

GengarIsBestBoy One time I had a dream that I was trying to narrate one of my stories but it kept getting interrupted by Freddy fazbear
Mar 28, 2023
Snoink
Mar 27, 2023
FireEyes, Seirre, Quillfeather, GengarIsBestBoy, tatteredbones, Spearmint, BluesClues, Que, Nate, Meshugenah, EternalRain, Hkumar, Dossereana, ChesTacos, lliyah, rida, Mageheart, Omni, LuxLuthor, Lael, winterwolf0100

*CLUCKING INTENSIFIES*

Spearmint SO CUTE
Mar 27, 2023

Meshugenah omg
Mar 27, 2023

ChesTacos has @lliyah seen this yet?
Mar 28, 2023

lliyah GORGEOUS! Absolutely love it! :') :

(Also shameless plug, but you could totally submit a photo of your crochet creation to COOP if you wanted! https://coopzine.wordpress.com/submit/ )
Mar 28, 2023

Snoink It's not quite done! She still needs wings, feet/ legs, and tall feathers. But the face is there now!
Mar 28, 2023

Lael I’ve been thinking of crocheting a chicken myself recently… Maybe this is my cue
Mar 28, 2023

Snoink Yessssss. Let the chickens multiply!

The pattern that I'm using is from Jess Huff's private crochet facebook group that I joined... someone modified one of her patterns to make a chicken and generously posted the file free on that group. If you would rather not join, I guess I can send you the pdf file for it, if you're comfortable with me doing that. ^^
Mar 28, 2023

Lael It’s okay, I think I’ve found a pattern I’m interested in trying already! Thanks for the offer though I’ll let you know if I change my mind
Mar 29, 2023

Snoink Remember to post pics of your chicken!!!
Mar 29, 2023

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Snoink
Mar 26, 2023
FireEyes, Spearmint, Meshugenah, ForeverYoung299, EternalRain, tatteredbones, Dossereana, Nate, Que, Lib, Prokaryote, Corvid, Plume, BluesClues, foxmaster, Carlito, Mageheart, winterwolf0100

Look what we found in the field!!! Someone was shedding.

Snoink (I should say, just in case you didn't know, there is a deer herd that likes to sleep in our fields and that these deer naturally shed their antlers around this time... so no deer were harmed for this picture! ^^)
Mar 26, 2023

soundofmind sometime i forget it's a thing that deer naturally just SHED their ANTLERS. its still so weird to me... like they just POP OFF
Mar 27, 2023

Lib I literally never knew about this and I was actually so confused but that is so cool
Mar 27, 2023

Snoink It literally feels like a solid bone! I know we have teeth that fall out when we're younger, this is really solid and hard and big! It's kind of astonishing to think that it could just fall out like that.
Mar 27, 2023

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Snoink
Mar 26, 2023
tatteredbones, Spearmint, Nate, Dossereana, Mageheart, EternalRain, IcyFlame, BluesClues, Carlito, winterwolf0100

... okay, I was going to stop reviewing, but I am at 3799 reviews, and that number is an awful place to stop...
Snoink
Mar 26, 2023
DreamyAlice, Nate, Mageheart, tatteredbones, EternalRain, Que, Spearmint, Dossereana, Meshugenah, Carlito, winterwolf0100

I GAINED OVER 1000 POINTS FROM MY REVIEWS ON REVIEW DAY!!!!

*cheers*

Only one more review to do to accomplish my goal of 10 reviews...

Snoink (Also, I feel slightly less guilty for posting an entire chapter before review day, hahaha.)
Mar 26, 2023
Snoink
Mar 26, 2023
Plume, Hkumar, FireEyes, Lael, tatteredbones, TheBlueCat, Omni, Quillfeather, IcyFlame, Que, Spearmint, Dossereana, Hannah, winterwolf0100

... my characters.

Hkumar I'm in this picture. :')
Mar 26, 2023
Soulkana
Mar 25, 2023

Snoink my darling <3 Hello from the abyss that I've crawled from with my writing muse thankfully intact <3

Snoink Hi!!! I hope your crawl from the abyss was short lived... being there never is fun! <3
Mar 25, 2023

Soulkana Much help from a self care app i found <3 things are going better haha.
Mar 25, 2023
Snoink
Mar 25, 2023
Euphory, tatteredbones, Spearmint, Dossereana, Mageheart, BluesClues, winterwolf0100

...okay. So I put the third chapter of Conqueror Rising up, which is super exciting because it introduces one of my all-time favorite characters in the series: Cyrus.

(Even if @Spearmint says she hates Cyrus with an undying passion, haha.)

Anyway, the chapter starts here: Conqueror Rising: Chapter 3.1

Spearmint >.>

Spoiler! :

don’t be fooled by his charms, dear readers :<

still gonna like the chapters though xD <3
Mar 25, 2023

Snoink

Spoiler! :

Lemme guess... this is your favorite part of the chapter...

Cyrus turned to Solea. “And you, my quiet one. You must try to find your voice, for I fear that you are tangled up in this matter as well. What is your opinion?”

Mar 25, 2023

Spearmint

Spoiler! :

OH THE IRONY XD

Mar 25, 2023

Snoink

Spoiler! :

Okay, but SERIOUSLY you're only saying that Cyrus is terrible because she picked the second path. And then Cyrus stumbled on the truth accidentally when he was trying his best not to hurt his grandma's former ally. (This is the ONLY reason why he stumbled on the truth... if she picked any other path, nobody would be any wiser.)

If she had taken the third path, he likely would have stayed his hand because, as mad as he was -- and he had every possible reason to be mad, I'll remind you! -- he wasn't that mad. (Not that this would have ended well... Sergius would have probably used this opportunity to push his agenda further and disaster would ensue for the Swans, because AGAIN. Diamea Reborn was still out there and if Sergius had pushed things further, Diamea Reborn probably would have just snapped.)

If she took the first path... well, let's just say that would have been... UM. A LOT. Because then YOU KNOW the whole news would absolutely go back to Alainna, and you already know that Sergius would say to Alainna, "My Lady, this has happened, and if there is any child that is produced from this union, it will kill you." And then what do you think Alainna would do then? THINGS WOULD GO POORLY.

...I might have possibly fully developed all of these various plots, haha. Though, not in writing! Just in my head. But in either case, the Swans are more of the villains that Cyrus ever was. XD

Mar 26, 2023

Spearmint

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Love that you have all those alternate dimension timelines planned out xD But really, Cyrus tore Adelore limb from limb... >.< And stabbed Alainna... Okay, but to be fair, you're right that the Swans would objectively be the greater villains, lol. It's just that Cyrus was horrible to my favorite characters...

Mar 26, 2023

Snoink

Spoiler! :

He was mad with bloodlust! Adelore admitted that he himself kicked a Swan and started a whole mini frenzy. Besides, he was forgiven!

And Alainna was acting sketchy af. In Cyrus's perspective, she suddenly disappeared for several months without anybody knowing where she went. Her own parents didn't even know! Then suddenly she appears on precisely the night where a whole bunch of White Swans suddenly break in??? And she's cuddling with a strange Black Swan in her lap? And pretending that everything is perfectly fine???? Then, when he asked her about things, she was clearly lying to all his questions and acting really odd, as if he were already guilty before he even did anything. He probably thought that she was trying to set him up with her Swan army and destroy him, using her authority as the Lady! So he probably was happy to set her up and destroy her first... or, if not destroy, then at the very least ruin her reputation. It wasn't as if he was gleefully doing this. He was retaliating for what he perceived as an attack that she culpable for. Remember... he had been set up several times and survived two assassination attempts at that point. He was fighting for his life at that point.

Mar 26, 2023

Spearmint

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gahh and this is why i can't even hate him completely, because you show his circumstances and complexity, and i feel bad for him :') ...still at spot infinity tho xD

Mar 26, 2023

Snoink

Spoiler! :

It'll be interesting what you think of everyone at the end of book 4! When Ifinally write it...

Mar 27, 2023

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