*This is what I imagine Jeff the Killer’s proxy pledge to be like. This fanfiction is under my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Jeff the Killer (this version, anyway) was a character created by GameFuelTV. Gacha Club character designs are under my forum titled “My character designs<33”. I hope you enjoy this!*
Tonight begins my life of wearing the blood smile
To cry was to be human
And to be human was to be weak
But tonight I am born anew
Porcelain bleach to wash away my feeble, breakable skin
Fire to burn my scars away
And a blood smile that stretches for miles
I take this knife and carve my face
I save myself from this waste
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Ah another poem, excellent =D I can use this for the review contest!
I really like this poem. It feels visceral and at the same time descriptive! I also like the rhythm. That said, I find the last line particularly weak. It kinda stands out, like it doesn’t really fit with the flow of the rest of the poem. Hm.
But otherwise, I really like it!
Nice. I know more about Jeff so I get the references here more. I don't have enough to say i haven't said for the other pledge to make a review so just here to say this is pretty cool
Thanks ^v^