Hello! I'm back with a super quick review for this chapter.
Crybaby gently pushed Johnny as he rode on his bicycle. They had been meeting for a while and had shared secrets. Like how he hadn’t ridden a bicycle without training wheels on.
It was his first time and she was right there, by his side.
“Ride like we practiced, okay?” Crybaby asked gently.
Johnny nodded. He was frightened, she could see it.
“You’ve got this.” She said, letting go.
So, he's always ridden with training wheels. How old is he anyway? But she's teaching him, that's nice of her. She seems to be very encouraging, so maybe she's half-nice, even though sh's a killer.
There was a big dog, running down the sidewalk. Phlegm seeped from its mouth, its eyes were completely bloodshot.
Ick. He sounds like a very creepy dog, you described it well. Does the dog have rabies or something? Maybe it's possessed.
She wasn’t focused on him. She was completely focused on the dog, making sure it wouldn’t hurt him, wouldn’t touch him.
“You are doing this! Your eyes are black! You’re a monster!”
“What?” Crybaby asked, tears already starting to form in her eyes.
That's so sad! She was just trying to help him. Is that what she was keeping frm him in the previous chapter? That she has kind of creepy powers?
“No! Get away from me!” He cried out, running away.....
...He was running so fast…as if he were scared of her…
But she wasn’t scary and he knew that.
Didn’t he?
Oooh that's a spooky ending. So he's scared of her. Maybe this is where LJ comes in. This makes me excited for the next chapter!
Another spooky chapter in the series. It has me asking so many questions. I hope you decide to continue this story!
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