Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for violence.
*This fanfic is under my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under this forum: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=116005&start=1095. Laughing Jack was created by Snuffbomb, Jason the Toymaker was created by Krisantyl, and Aeliana is my OC. I hope you enjoy!*
“That’s it? That’s the show? I thought there would be more!” Aeliana cried out.
“There will be more later. Sometimes, good things take time. You’ve got to be heading home.” Laughing Jack smiled.
He smiled, but the grin hurt his face. He had spent what he believed to be eight hours entertaining Aeliana and he wanted to go back to the toy shop, back to Jason, away from that little girl. The only reason it seemed fast was because his magic made it feel that way.
But alas, a clown had to put up an act.
“Later? But that was amazing! Can you please do one more? For me?!” Aeliana asked, her blue eyes seeming to plead with him.
Laughing Jack sighed, shaking his head with a careful grin that didn’t show the sharpness of his teeth and said:
“We’re friends now. I’m going to visit you many times and I’ll play many games with you. But you have to go home now. It’s late.”
He hoped that she wouldn’t ask again, because the itch to tear her apart until she was nothing but a bloody mass of flesh and bones was already at the corner of his mind and he couldn’t be hasty. He couldn’t kill her yet. It was too early.
He had to ball one of his claws up in a fist to keep himself from lunging at her.
Aeliana shifted her feet, looked down glumly, then looked back up.
“Okay, I guess I’ll go home. But you’ll come back, right?”
Laughing Jack nodded. He didn’t want to speak, his words wouldn’t sound right.
She smiled and then, he beckoned her to come closer with his free claw. She got up from the bleachers and held it, not noticing or choosing not to comment on his other claw.
With a puff of his black smoke magic, Laughing Jack went on his journey to take her home.
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@Ravena you might want to see this.
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I kinda like this limitation of his, or at least that it sounds like one: “But alas, a clown had to put up an act.”
Also that there is a real method to how he murders his children. That is also interesting to note.
Tho I find that it would rly be better if this were part of the other chapters in this story line. It would make it easier to follow. And I probably would make greater sense of this last sentence here: “With a puff of his black smoke magic, Laughing Jack went on his journey to take her home.“ Did he take her home? Or did he ask her to go home to her own place and she does? I am confusion ☹
As I began reading this piece of fanfiction, I came to realize that LJ isn't really much of a bad guy. He wants this little girl to get away from him because he does not want to hurt her, and that's really sweet. Even though he might be a killer and all, I really don't think he's trying to harm anybody (my theory).
''He smiled, but the grin hurt his face. He had spent what he believed to be eight hours entertaining Aeliana and he wanted to go back to the toy shop, back to Jason, away from that little girl. The only reason it seemed fast was because his magic made it feel that way.''
I like how LJ wants to get away from her, so as not to hurt her.
''He hoped that she wouldn’t ask again, because the itch to tear her apart until she was nothing but a bloody mass of flesh and bones was already at the corner of his mind and he couldn’t be hasty. He couldn’t kill her yet. It was too early.
He had to ball one of his claws up in a fist to keep himself from lunging at her.''
What does he mean he can't kill her yet? Does he not want too?
Another successful fanfiction work that was reviewed by me Creeper! Keep it up!
He%u2019s planning to hurt her later. He needs to gain her trust first.
Thx for reading!
Ur welcome!