Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for violence.
*This fanfic is underneath my folder titled “Creepypasta stuff”. Gacha Club character designs are under this forum: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=116005&start=1080. The Creepypasta characters in this are Jeff the Killer (created by GameFuelTV) and Nina the Killer (created by Alegotic-twevel). I’m redoing Nina’s origin story. Anyway, enjoy!*
Nina lay in bed, holding the butter knife up to her chest, repeating Jeff the Killer’s name as many times as she wanted. Her friends had already left when he didn’t come the first time, but she wouldn’t give up. She couldn’t give up.
If she really loved Jeff, then she had to keep trying. She had to wait until he came. Maybe her friends didn’t believe, but Nina did. Nina knew in her heart of hearts that Jeff would come, she just had to keep hoping and trying and-
“Go to sleep, Nina. You don’t want your family to hear you.”
Nina’s heart raced rapidly in her chest. She was so sure that she heard it. It sounded so real! Like a man’s voice, but gravely and yet somehow soft.
She pulled the covers away from her face and jolted up, a smile spreading on her face when she saw who was standing in the corner of her room.
There, with his white hoodie stained with blood, his jeans stained with dirt and a familiar carved on, bloody smile, was Jeff the Killer, the Creepypasta of her dreams, the man she knew would come!
And yet, there was a small hint of anger in her at the thought that he came later.
“Why didn’t you come when my friends were here?” Nina asked, the question coming out sharper than she intended.
But Jeff didn’t seem fazed. Then again, Nina didn’t know what he felt, since he couldn’t move his lips much.
He just sighed and said:
“I don’t need the whole internet to know who I am. None of us do. They only know ideas of us, but they don’t know who or what we really are. Only a select few do. Nina, you want to be special, right?”
Special? But wasn’t she already special? Unless…she could be more special if she kept Jeff’s existence a secret.
“It’s better if my existence was kept between you and me. I could tell you so many things about what it’s like to be me. I could make you my proxy. But you can’t tell anyone about us, not even your friends. It has to be our secret, okay?”
Jeff’s white, pupil-less eyes somehow looked so earnest, so pleading, that Nina’s heart twisted with sympathy. Jeff was asking her to do something for him. The Jeff the Killer.
But what about her friends? Didn’t they have a right to know about him? To know that he was out there? It didn’t feel right to keep him hidden from them.
Yet if she told them, then Jeff would surely find out. He was a Creepypasta. He had powers that no human could even imagine. If he found out, then he would be hurt and he’d never want to speak to her again. He wouldn’t make her a proxy.
Besides, it’d be nice to have someone like Jeff on her side when there were kids at school who made fun of girls like her. Someone who craved blood.
Nina nodded and Jeff’s eyes twinkled as though he was genuinely grinning.
“Amazing! First of all, that’s not how you summon me. But I came because you’re special.”
What? That wasn’t the right way? But she studied on Wattpad and they all said the same thing!
Before she could ask him anything more, he disappeared, so impossibly fast, like the click of website tabs.
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AH okay. Nina. Summoning Jeff. Here we are. Now I just need to find out if this is before or after she already successfully talked to him and he told her that Alyssa is doing fivehundred times better than her…
Sounds like after. Gotcha.
I also love that she is not one bit intimidated or too awestruck to act. She immediately rounds on him for being late. Excellent!
Ah we are getting explanations abt proxys now. That’s also good.
I think she just has to cut her losses, laugh about the “failed” summoning with her friends and keep the real Jeff a secret huh?
Oh I like that the summoning method was wrong but he came anyway (probably bc she is a pretty devoted follower?)
Was there supposed to be a picture or something in this chapter? Did YWS eat it?
I don%u2019t know why there is a mark for an image because I didn%u2019t put any there.
But thx for reading this!
Me personally, Nina is not my favorite creepypasta. I don't even know if she is a real creepypasta. She just sounds like to me a delusional creepypasta fangirl, much like the real story of this girl who killed a girl to appease Slenderman. She's not my favorite but I respect people who do like her.
''Nina lay in bed, holding the butter knife up to her chest, repeating Jeff the Killer’s name as many times as she wanted. Her friends had already left when he didn’t come the first time, but she wouldn’t give up. She couldn’t give up.
If she really loved Jeff, then she had to keep trying. She had to wait until he came. ''
Normal fangirling be like. I like the commitment and dedication Nina has to actually looking for Jeffrey (I like calling him Jeffrey).
''“Go to sleep, Nina. You don’t want your family to hear you.”
It's almost as if Jeffrey might like Nina a bit, or is maybe using her, I don't know. You can never tell with creepypastas.
''“I don’t need the whole internet to know who I am. None of us do. They only know ideas of us, but they don’t know who or what we really are. Only a select few do. Nina, you want to be special, right?”
I thought Slenderman would only have proxies, but other creepypastas can have proxies too? It's been a long time since I read anything about creepypastas, so I might be a little dumb.
Overall, I loved this fanfiction piece. I have an idea though. How about a story of how Nina is so clingy with Jefrrey, and you could make it humorous.
Me personally, Nina is not my favorite creepypasta. I don't even know if she is a real creepypasta. She just sounds like to me a delusional creepypasta fangirl, much like the real story of this girl who killed a girl to appease Slenderman. She's not my favorite but I respect people who do like her.
''Nina lay in bed, holding the butter knife up to her chest, repeating Jeff the Killer’s name as many times as she wanted. Her friends had already left when he didn’t come the first time, but she wouldn’t give up. She couldn’t give up.
If she really loved Jeff, then she had to keep trying. She had to wait until he came. ''
Normal fangirling be like. I like the commitment and dedication Nina has to actually looking for Jeffrey (I like calling him Jeffrey).
''“Go to sleep, Nina. You don’t want your family to hear you.”
It's almost as if Jeffrey might like Nina a bit, or is maybe using her, I don't know. You can never tell with creepypastas.
''“I don’t need the whole internet to know who I am. None of us do. They only know ideas of us, but they don’t know who or what we really are. Only a select few do. Nina, you want to be special, right?”
I thought Slenderman would only have proxies, but other creepypastas can have proxies too? It's been a long time since I read anything about creepypastas, so I might be a little dumb.
Overall, I loved this fanfiction piece. I have an idea though. How about a story of how Nina is so clingy with Jefrrey, and you could make it humorous.
Me personally, Nina is not my favorite creepypasta. I don't even know if she is a real creepypasta. She just sounds like to me a delusional creepypasta fangirl, much like the real story of this girl who killed a girl to appease Slenderman. She's not my favorite but I respect people who do like her.
''Nina lay in bed, holding the butter knife up to her chest, repeating Jeff the Killer’s name as many times as she wanted. Her friends had already left when he didn’t come the first time, but she wouldn’t give up. She couldn’t give up.
If she really loved Jeff, then she had to keep trying. She had to wait until he came. ''
Normal fangirling be like. I like the commitment and dedication Nina has to actually looking for Jeffrey (I like calling him Jeffrey).
''“Go to sleep, Nina. You don’t want your family to hear you.”
It's almost as if Jeffrey might like Nina a bit, or is maybe using her, I don't know. You can never tell with creepypastas.
''“I don’t need the whole internet to know who I am. None of us do. They only know ideas of us, but they don’t know who or what we really are. Only a select few do. Nina, you want to be special, right?”
I thought Slenderman would only have proxies, but other creepypastas can have proxies too? It's been a long time since I read anything about creepypastas, so I might be a little dumb.
Overall, I loved this fanfiction piece. I have an idea though. How about a story of how Nina is so clingy with Jefrrey, and you could make it humorous.
Hmm
I understand why a lot of ppl don%u2019t like Nina. Me personally, I feel sorry for her, because she is just a fangirl who went way too far. In my AU, she is a teenage girl who will literally do anything for Jeff, even if it hurts her or others. Jeff is an adult and she is a teen in my AU.
Yes, Jeff is using her. He does not like her at all.
And yes, Slenderman is the only one who can make proxies but I made other Creepypastas able to make proxies in my AU bc yes.
Idk if you know much about infection AUs but I'm trying to make a my little pony one. (thats probably why I spend my entire day watching mlp episodes).
I heard about them