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My tokens of service for new challenges I've attempted:

The original ten:
1: My Life
2: French Fries.
3: Network of Keys Chapter One: Cynthia, Volunteers (Redone)
4: Falling For Science
5: Church Bells
6: hjg
7: The book of Livia Chapter 1 I did it again
8: Warning, very graphic with swears, suicide and such!
9: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Two (Elegie)
10: 25 to life. (work in progress, more to come)

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Fellows in Arms badge:
Sunsets
Review of (then) fellow squire TheMessenger

I humbly request that a sword be bequeathed upon me for completion of the requirements to bear a blade. Here are my tokens of service:
11: Bad Pick Up Lines and Jokes
12: I Cry When I Laugh
13: Life Cycle
14: The Life of an Assassin - Intro & Ch. 1
15: Bye Bye, Big Blue
For my shield:
16: Part One
17: Ravenwood Investigations Part 1
18: Stalking- sometimes it's good...
19: Reality is Fantasy
20: "Re-birthing"
For my helmet:
21: How Long
22: Longing
23: In My Way
24: Foxtrot
25: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 5
For my horse:
26: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Three (Bird)
27: Eternal Sunshine
28: The Key to Autus, Chap. 1 & 2
29: Just Another Love Scene That May Never Happen Again
30: What The Winter Brings...
31: Books and Music Saved My Life
32: symbiosis
33: Sad Life
34: David, David, What Have You Done For Us?
35: The Alder King
For my Full Armor:
36: A Little Demon at Camp part 1
37: It's funny how sickness seeps into the body
38: "Me"
39: Broken
40: I am Not Malala
41: Ch 1 - Ch 3
42: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Four (Bride and the Balcony)
43: Rain.
44: P.S. I love you
45: Elementary to High school
For my Jousting Lance,
46: The Head, Part 2. BRACE YOURSELVES
47: Sempiternal- Chapter One
48: The Beast
49: Noting the Difference: Creeper vs Stalker
50: Homework
51: Behavior Problems (The Bad Child Ep. 1)
52: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Five (Priest on Fire​​)
53: Just In Case You Thought This World Was A Fair One
54: Clearly, You Are Not A Writer!
55: Doom Making It's Way.
For my Coat of Arms,
56: That's The Way I Am.
57: The Head Part 3/3 The End and Epilogue
58: Where the Sun Goes Down
59: entanglement
60: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 7
61: Beginnings part 1
62: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Six (Pig Child)
63: Little Dragon, written when I was ten years old.
64: Nights of despair
65: Peace
66: Make me a sun
67: A gentle fear.
68: Bare and Broken, Locked and Stolen
69: Count On Me.
70: Fenton's Lady ch. 1
71: The Diary and The Girl
72: "Too Late
73: Forget Me Not
74: Chapter One: Festival/Joy/Challenge
75: The Assassin- Part 3
76: Angel (Chapter 1)
77: Twelve Years: Just One More
78: Rebuilding Thunder: Chapter 1
79: rippling
80: In Debt
81: The Hulk Over Driehel
82: I'm Sorry
83: Network of Keys Chapter 2: Cynthia, Coming Out of the Closet (Redone)
84: Network of Keys Chapter 3: Ky, First Words (Redone)
85: This is a Test
86: a sickle in the dust
87: My Worst Week (Part 4)
88: Writing my plight (knives and pens)
89: A Week For the World: Day 1 :Part 1
90: The Circle of Life (in the key of Em)
91: The Feeling of Meh
92: The Ghost
93: The Key to Autus, Chapter 3-4
94: Noting the Difference: Geek vs Nerd
95: Paper Girl
96: Detachment
97: The Life of an Assassin - Ch. 2
98: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Seven (Sweet and Sour)
99: Shoes
100: What Happened to the Time
For a Jeweled Chalice,
101: End of Messages
102: Chasing Dragons- Chapter Two
103: castaway
104: Why my flag is black.
105: I am
106: Four Foot Three
107: caesura
108: The Chronicles of Xaba: Part One
109: The Dawn of Winter (Remastered)
110: I Cannot Speak For I Have Lost Words.
111: Taking Flight (Part Two)
112: The Ring of Time--The Ring of the Future
113: These are the Children
114: Mayday Chapter 1
115: Paxton Chapter one
116: Paxton Chapter Two
117: Mayday Chapter 2
118: Mayday chapter 3
119: Paxton Chapter three
120: The Ring
121: Stretching Time
122: Minds are opened only when hearts are opened!
123: Runaway Minds
124: Don't You Mistake Us
125: 29 Capitol Limited
126: Innocence
127: In Love Again
128: Where in the world?
129: The Chronicles of Xaba: Part One (Take Two)
130: The Key of Autus, Chap. 5-6
131: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Eight (Burning with Desire)
132: Mysterious Ways (chapter 1)
133: Who is the King of the Playground?
134: scriptless
135: No More Apologies
136: Life Moves On
137: Living Weapons: Chapter One
138: Your Words Will Change The World
139: Where I am From
140: Envy, Anger, Destruction
141: Taking Flight (Part Three)
142: Angel (Chapter 2)
143: story success
144: The Cursed Ashi
145: Paradise
146: Dreamt?Great.. Now go do it!
147: Life is a journey
148: Constellation of thoughts
149: 188-396
150: Untitled Work 5
For a Chest of Silver,
151: For Griffypoo
152: A Woman's World.
153: Palm Reading
154: Twerk (A Poem From A Rapper's Point of View)
155: Jonathon Six (Sneak-Peek Part One)
156: Leprosy
157: Nothing Sweet
158: This, My Excavation
159: Extinguisher
160: Children of the Forest - Part 1: Prologue
161: Run And Hide. (Edited)
162: Sheridan Holmes: A Cold Case PART 13
163: Sheridan Holmes: A Cold Case PART 12
164: Living Weapons: Prologue
165: Re-peat
166: Tricks
167: Pokemon Diamond Destinies - Chapter 1 Part 1:The Adventure Continues
168: Welcome To Hell
169: CK-P1: Chapter 8:
170: What day is it?
171: Inhuman
172: The Veda of Pablo- Book 1- Fathers
173: KotGR review battle #1 Chapter 1
174: Adventures at Evening (experimentation with iambic pentameter)
175: Perfect: Chapter 1
176: Total Technology Takeover
177: Technology Now and Then
178: Technology for a Better Future
179: Technology on the Other Side
180: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 8.
181: Paxton Chapter Four
182: Rebuilding Thunder Chapter 2
183: What Life Means To Me?
184: The Cycle
185: Friends Reunited
186: They'll Never Know Any Hope
187: Too demanding?!
188: The Key of Autus, chapters 7-8
189: Technology; Molding the Future
190: Blank 2
191: i can't love after you.
192: Empty 5
193: Persephone's Lament
194: Start to a story - Nature's Finest
195: That one story...that isn't done
196: A Stroll Amidst Seasons
197: Network of Keys Chapter 4: Cynthia, The Next Morning
198: Friend or Foe?
199: Reaf
200: Strengths of the U.S. Constitution & Government System
For a Chest of Gold:
201: Paxton Chapter Five
202: Ennui (The Media Center)
203: I Am the Reader, You Are the Book
204: The Cycle of Seasons
205: Razors
206: Blood
207: Letting You In. (Jcsmooth)
208: Undecided Title :)
209: Tower of Pleasure
210: Though I...
211: Between The Angel and The Devil - Chapter Two
212: Trapped
213: When in Doubt, always choose 'C.'
214: City of Undying Secrets
215: I Am Not Limitless
216: Dada [Oh the irony]
217: Thoughts before a abnormal situation.
218: Cops 'N' Robbers (Chapter 1)
219: Teaser/prologue for a considered Thriller.
220: Vixen Academy; Chapter One
221: Your coming, dear sir
222: Vampiric
223: Certain
224: Sakenkra (working title) [1/?]
225: Precept Essay- Meaning
226: Clarity
227: Hell's Gatekeeper (Chapter 6) (part 2)
228: We have this thing.
229: Am I Writer
230: flip
231: Conversations with Myself: Chapter 6 - The All Clear Sounded
232: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Prologue
233: A Day in the Life of a Psychotic Drug Crazed Maniac
234: The War of The North-Prologue
235: Matileo Chapter One
236: The Keys to Silence Are Black and White
237: The Pursuit of Pleasure (A Hedonist's Perspective)
238: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Chapter 1
239: The Pack - Chapter Four - Newt
240: Changed
241: Grief's Relief
242: The Misery - Ch.1
243: The Dragons Reward 2
244: N/A
245: Two sides of a story 6-10
246: To Save The World: Planning & Brainstorm
247: Guardians Rising
248: Globetrotters - Chapter 2, Nanya
249: Untitled Novel - Prologue
250: Unrequited
For my Unicorn:
251: Sanctuary: There i was here I am
252: To Do No Harm
253: Without A Trace - Chapter One
254: 30 Day Writing Challenge
255: Prologue: A Puzzling Victim
256: Wages: Chapter One
257: Luck Doesn't Always Come In Threes (Prologue and ch. 1)
258: Luck Doesn't Always Come In Threes (ch. 2)
259: Red Ink Chapter 1
260: Finding Watson Pt 1
261: Finding Watson Pt 2
262: Finding Watson Pt 3
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In pursuit of land,
Many series there be, yet none as yet meet the requirements. So here are the series I am currently following.

Elegy of Flight:
1: Elegy of Flight: Chapter One (Did you hear?)
2: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Two (Elegie)
3: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Three (Bird)
4: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Four (Bride and the Balcony)
5: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Five (Priest on Fire​​)
6: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Six (Pig Child)
7: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Seven (Sweet and Sour)
8: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Eight (Burning with Desire)

Paxton:
1: Paxton Chapter one
2: Paxton Chapter Two
3: Paxton Chapter three
4: Paxton Chapter Four
5: Paxton Chapter Five

Mayday:
1: Mayday Chapter 1
2: Mayday Chapter 2
3: Mayday chapter 3

Network of Keys:
1: Network of Keys Chapter One: Cynthia, Volunteers (Redone)
2: Network of Keys Chapter 2: Cynthia, Coming Out of the Closet (Redone)
3: Network of Keys Chapter 3: Ky, First Words (Redone)
4: Network of Keys Chapter 4: Cynthia, The Next Morning

The Life of an Assassin:
1: The Life of an Assassin - Intro & Ch. 1
2: The Life of an Assassin - Ch. 2

Part One:
1: Part One

The Book of Livia:
1: The book of Livia Chapter 1 I did it again

The Key to Autus:
1: The Key to Autus, Chap. 1 & 2
2: The Key to Autus, Chapter 3-4
3: The Key of Autus, Chap. 5-6
4: The Key of Autus, chapters 7-8

The Head:
1: The Head.
2: The Head, Part 2. BRACE YOURSELVES
3: The Head Part 3/3 The End and Epilogue

The Bad Child:
1: Behavior Problems (The Bad Child Ep. 1)

Beginnings:
1: Beginnings part 1

Fenton's Lady:
1: Fenton's Lady ch. 1


Completed Challenges:

For the Head of a Wild Boar badge,
Reality is Fantasy

For the Badge of the Shrubbery,
In My Way

For the Village Badge,
Elegy of Flight:
1: Elegy of Flight: Chapter One (Did you hear?)
2: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Two (Elegie)
3: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Three (Bird)
4: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Four (Bride and the Balcony)
5: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Five (Priest on Fire​​)

For the Town Badge,
The Head:
1: The Head.
2: The Head, Part 2. BRACE YOURSELVES
3: The Head Part 3/3 The End and Epilogue

For the Kingdom Badge,
Finding Watson:
1: Finding Watson Pt 1
2: Finding Watson Pt 2
3: Finding Watson Pt 3


Contest Reviews:
1: Foxtrot
2: A Cowardly Pandora
3: Calypso
4: Hope.
5: 10 Extremely Helpful Tips to Surviving (Most of) High School


For future service completions I will update on this post. After all, a Knight must be a good steward of their respective environment.
In loyal service,
D.F.P., Knight Dragon
  





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Thu Dec 12, 2013 11:56 pm
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Knight Dragon walks into the Castle, removing his gauntlets and slapping them against his thighs to beat off the dust of the field. He has just finished talking with the crafter of his new Coat of Arms, and heads through the Main Hall to a staircase inset in the back wall. Removing his helm Chie, he heads up the stairs, feeling the weight of all his exploits crashing down on his shoulders the higher he goes. Each step lays the weight and fatigue of each rescue on his tired body, slipping beneath his armor with little effort. He has succeeded in slaying many terrible beasts, over 200 foes that stood in his way, and rescued countless works from the Green Room. He ascends to the highest level, and enters a room that opens to his left. The room is as grimy as his armor, and as dusty as the fields through which he's run on foot and ridden across on horseback. The only disruption of the dust is the fresh trail of footprints, footprints he'd left just recently, that led to the wall, where his Boar's Head hung. He created a new set of tracks across the floor, walking over to the clean table he'd placed in the room the same day he'd hung the Boar's Head, beneath the sunlight streaming through the window. Scrolls and tomes covered most of the table, and in the center was a fresh parchment, bearing the words of his most recent writing. Placing Chie on the table next to the paper, he turned and inspected the room.
On the wall to the right of the door was a rack of pegs, perfect for a Knight to store his weaponry on. He slid Bitoku, his shield, off his back and set it upon its peg, then detached his sword belt and hung his sword Doragon beside Bitoku. His armor was notched on the right epaulet, for both rescuing a fellow Knight's work and from the Shrubbery he'd encountered during a long journey from the Castle grounds. His horse Ayla was already stabled, and near her stall was his Jousting Lance Shimiru, reserved for tournaments, and perhaps the upcoming Review Day he would ride Ayla with Shimiru, ready to assail any beast that stood in his path. He smiled and walked back over to the window, gazing out at the Village and Town in the distance. He'd accomplished so much in so little time, and yet there was still much to do. Like cleaning out his room, for starters. He placed his gauntlets on the table and reached for the broom, attacking the dust with as much vengeance as he did the beasts that withstood him. And when he was done cleaning, he thought, he would rest and then return to the wastelands to rescue more works in danger.
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Fri Dec 13, 2013 8:15 pm
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So that all the world may see, I, Knight Dragon, vow to achieve what very few have done: acquire orange stars. I pledge my loyalty to YWS, to serve the community in pursuit of my goal, and not to give small, weak, or otherwise worthless reviews in pursuit of this goal. I shall not neglect my duties as a Knight or Moderator in my quest, and shall maintain strong connections between myself and fellow Knights and YWSers.
I challenge all who read this to embark with me upon this journey. This is not a quest of speed, but of endurance. The goal is not to achieve the highest quantity in the shortest amount of time, but the highest quality in pursuit of the quantity, for however long that takes.
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Sun Jan 05, 2014 9:45 pm
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Knight Dragon! For your grand profilic-ness of reviewing I have awarded you your chest of silver and chest of gold achievements. Congratulations and godspeed!
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*bows* Thank you, milady. Onward I march for the mythical beast known as a "unicorn."
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I feel very odd. I have just completed reviewing a second complete work, but since it was only in three parts, I don't have enough reviews for a Hamlet. So I will have a Village, a Town, and a Kingdom, but no Hamlet. Grr....
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Sat Jan 11, 2014 10:56 am
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The requirement for the village badge was only to complete five consecutive chapters, not to finish the whole piece so I must point out that Elegy of Flight continues for at least another three chapters and can not be counted toward a kingdom. Keep journeying good Knight, the path is hard, but you will make it.
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Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:43 pm
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@Rydia
I was not counting Elegy of Flight towards my kingdom. The Head, a three part story, was completed for the Town Badge, and Finding Watson was another three part story, which I reviewed in its entirety. Those are the two I am claiming for my Kingdom. My apologies for not clarifying earlier.
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Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:50 pm
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Ah, sorry, I misread the badge info and thought it said it required three! In that case, I am delighted to award you with a kingdom and wish you many long and happy years as their ruler!
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Mon Jun 30, 2014 1:30 pm
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I'm officially breaking this up now. Once you go over 200 reviews, having all that in a single post is kind of unruly and hard to manage. So here's the break up!

For my sword:
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508 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 36791
Reviews: 508




User avatar
508 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 36791
Reviews: 508




User avatar
508 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 36791
Reviews: 508




User avatar
508 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 36791
Reviews: 508







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