Sphealwithit here, good morning
This is a good poem. A few grammatical errors here and there, that a simple re-read could fix.
The use of 'I' gives the poem an air of mystery. Which is good. This poem can be taken in alot of ways but from where i'm coming from is that people don't forgive when a mistake is made and it wears you down, you feel guilt and you don't know why people won't forgive you because in your eyes you've done nothing wrong.
Keep up the good work.
Sphealwithit out..
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