Young Writers Society

I believe you want poetry for your categorization. This doesn't fit as prose as it is now. Unless you're going to come back later and answer all of these questions in a more drawn out way. So then it would be prose if you did that. However, if you wanted this to be a poem that answered all the questions, you could write a second stanza with the same tempo to it.
Now, for the actual work itself, here's why it's a little difficult to review. If you want it to be a poem, then you need to work on the rhythm a little. It's pretty good, but it's just slightly off.
But if it's prose, then it leaves a lot to be considered, and you make no attempt at giving answers. So I think at the very least you should settle whether this is prose or poetry (and I have a feeling you're leaning towards poetry).
Hope this helps!

I really like how you used the repitition here! I also happen to know that finding good rhymes is not very easy! So good job on that! I really like the message that this is sending, and Think you did a great job!

Hey! ajruby12 here to review.
I really like how thought provoking and interesting you've made this! I think the word choice is good and the phrasing works well. However.. I'm not a person who likes repetition of lines, so this is simply my opinion.. But it just bothers me a tab bit when every line starts with the same thing. Also, I think an ending would suit this very well, just to tie things together. But I really like it!