WOW, that was really awesome. Your poem was powerful, driven, passionate and realistic. I say realistic because all of your reasons are valid, and true. Government corrupts, and if we unite together as "one people" the world would be a better place. I say passionate because obviously you believe greatly in this, that governments and separate nations create inequitable divisions through sex, race, religion etc. I say powerful and driven because this is like a punch to the face (the punch of political reality), and it made me take a step back and rethink. To conclude you did a fantastic job on you poem.
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