This is really good, i love the imagination in it. I would love to see it as a longer story, put into more detail on these worlds and the story beind them. I love the idea behind this, as you can really throw the net out and draw in anything to build around. It's different, and I like it.
Though I agreee with @KnightTeen with the fact that you need a different word other than "worlds" as it gets too repetitive.
Overall, I really enjoyed reading this piece of text and hope the review helps a bit. Keep up the good work!
0rki3
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