It's pretty difficult to review a poem that is grammatically correct with fantastic spelling, an amazing topic and written so brilliantly that I'm left sitting, staring at the screen with a look of 'damn, why didn't I write this' plastered onto my face. But, I guess I should try, nevertheless.
My favourite part was very easily the third stanza of
"I couldn't accept the concept of hell
until my feet were singed by the lava
even as my tears turned to ice before they fell."
I think it's quite true how I've perceived it (maybe not exactly how it was meant). The concept of hell is a difficult one, but the way you've written it; this uncertain person, who's dead and suddenly meets this entire world they could never have believed while alive. I truly love it. Well done, keep writing.
Points: 490
Reviews: 23
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