Wow, I really enjoyed trying to crack this one... no pun intended.
Anyway, so Gummy's the name, reviewing's my game! Today I'm going to review "flip" by Hannah!
I really like the use of symbolism and hyperbole in this piece. It's really charged up! ...Not like I can say the same for those jumper cables, though. The lack of capitals, of course, is intentional, and so is the almost complete lack of punctuation. It just serves as testament to the speaker's state of mind in this piece.
Now, I want to note but one thing about this piece: It could be longer. Of course, this is just my personal opinion, and it's all your call. I'm just saying that I think this piece is so condensed, it gives too much of a message for me to properly comprehend. I don't know, it's probably because I'm a rookie at this, so take my words with a grain of salt if you need to.
So, yeah, that's it! Take care, and I expect to read more of your works in the future! As always, remember that practice is the key, and keep writing!
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