Hello there.
When I first looked at this poem I was drawn to it, the way it is structured makes it look well thought out and just generally attractive. Good appearance is something that is necessary for a poem and you did it very well.
In the first stanza we see that the persona is personifying a book by saying that the book and it are connected through a 'friendship'. This technique helps us connect with the persona and read on.
The second stanza describes the subject as a gateway between two worlds; fantasy and reality. This is the part where - I think - that many relate to this poem. Whether you're into writing, reading or drawing, many of us know this 'gateway' that the persona speaks of. It shows others that they aren't alone in loving fantasy so much that their mind has to create a borderline in order to stop us getting sucked too far into this fantasy world that we end up despising or forgetting about reality. Although this stanza only lasts four lines, it can go much deeper and the point can last for so much longer in the minds of some.
The third stanza says that the persona hears a voice that isn't real, which I believe many hear when they get so engrossed and a book. Although something I would say would be that if the writer left out the 'and' in line four, it would look and sound a lot better.
The fourth and fifth is where the persona's point comes across, in what would be the heartfelt speech at the end of a movie. The one everyone agrees with and makes them see the light at the end.
The last line of the poem is a separate stanza, even though it's only one line, which asks the question that everyone has asked at one point in their lives. Yet the question changes the mood of the poem quite a bit after realising that despite everyone asking the same question, none has ever received an answer.
All in all I like this poem, it is attractive and relatable to all. Well done.
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