I loved the flow and almost violent beauty felt within this poem. However I felt that the poem lacked any real and raw emotion. It was, however, very well written and I enjoyed the imagery used in it.
Those who are too ignorant to see,
the beauty in fear.
The ending is what really grabbed me. I loved the contrast between 'beauty' and 'fear'. Great touch!
All in all the poem was well written and I fairly enjoyed it. I didn't see any technical mistakes. Good job, keep it up!
Points: 408
Reviews: 193
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