Wow! Nice poem. I wanna go inside the town of silent hill. Must be nice and spooky. The poem was very nice and Spookily explained. ( I am being super dumb). Writing this poem must have needed a lot of thinking and corrections but all it needs is hard work. But don't you think the sentence
" Once upon a time ago"
Is a bit babyish. You could have improved it by writing
" a very long time ago"
Because once upon a time is used in nursery stories and all (so babyish). But it's your opinion because it is your poem. Oh and please donate some points cause I am in need of some. Thanks.
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