redoing this cuz it didn't count last time...
PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! interesting!! i don't see how the moon goes with it. You split up the stanzas nicely, and have a good beat. You describe everything well without being too wordy. Great job on this, it has a lot of potential, yet could use some improvement. Keep writing!! Amazing!! Love it...
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