hmm...
I liked this, I am not about to shout at the top of my lungs off the top of the Golden Gate Bridge that it was amazing, but I did like it.
however...
but you never wanted to be called a masterpiece, - this seemed a bit cliché
however...
this -
don't you want to taste the air (one more time)
before you drown?
don't panic -
prince charming will make you gasp
all the way to neverneverland.
was quite good. I especially like the allusions and the imagery I got from reading it.
so to recap, I don't really have any ideas on how it could improve but I like it just the same.
ºMaatº
well and what everyone else said too...
Points: 890
Reviews: 8
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