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Won't Catch Me

by Firestarter



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Sat Feb 12, 2005 2:44 pm
Shawn Mitchell says...



I agree, it was very amusing. Did you keystyle it off the top of your head? It was a nice flow of things and good line length. Well done.




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Fri Feb 11, 2005 10:59 pm
A.O. Avalon wrote a review...



Well while the "haha your hair's aflame" line was a bit childish but altogether very amusing.
Sounds British-rocker-esque, which makes sense...
I agree, I like songs that get their point across, but aren't entirely "I love you but you don't love me/Broke up with me by your christmas tree/why oh why baby why" crappy-for-jerks-lyrics.




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Sun Feb 06, 2005 6:53 am
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Tara says...



Lol! Great song Jack, made me laugh :lol: Love it :thumb:




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Wed Feb 02, 2005 5:30 pm
Emma says...



Sorry Harley, I laugh at everything.... Please forgive me.




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Wed Feb 02, 2005 5:26 pm
Harley says...



i have asthma...

This was totally good because i love songs which sorta dont tell a story




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Thu Jan 27, 2005 6:24 pm
Emma says...



HaHa That is such a good lyric! I actully made a kool tune for it! Though u'll have ur own... Great! I liked that! 'Have an asthma attach! Hahahahahaha!





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