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I agree, it was very amusing. Did you keystyle it off the top of your head? It was a nice flow of things and good line length. Well done.
Well while the "haha your hair's aflame" line was a bit childish but altogether very amusing.
Sounds British-rocker-esque, which makes sense...
I agree, I like songs that get their point across, but aren't entirely "I love you but you don't love me/Broke up with me by your christmas tree/why oh why baby why" crappy-for-jerks-lyrics.
Lol! Great song Jack, made me laugh
Love it :thumb:
Sorry Harley, I laugh at everything.... Please forgive me.
i have asthma...
This was totally good because i love songs which sorta dont tell a story
HaHa That is such a good lyric! I actully made a kool tune for it! Though u'll have ur own... Great! I liked that! 'Have an asthma attach! Hahahahahaha!