I agree with Matt. It did have a lot of depth to it and a lot to take in.
The only thing:
"you're too scared to be impulsive, too afraid to let go of
the pointless traditions and superstitions you hold on to"
I thought the "of" in the first line seemed a little out of place. But I guess it has to be there. I don't know how you could possibly change it.
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