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*nods at Brad*
You're so right. I only liked the second stanza. Well, mainly because I wrote that bit first.
Thanks everyone for comments and whatnot.
The beginning was just ok, but I liked your 'hidden in your art gallery dungeon' line. That was really neat. Very cool. I also liked the description with which you made the flashes seem to come alive. Very nice way to start it off
This was really neat and I really enjoyed reading it. You used a lot of good descriptions. Very well done. 'subtle brush strokes of hidden enchantment'. That was cool
That was interesting. It wasn't as descriptive and interesting as the other stanzas but it definitley wasn't bad. A pretty strong ending. Very nice job in general. I liked it
This poem wallowed in mediocricity. The first stanza makes you sound like some manic depressive who lusts after Hillary Duff or Avril Lavigne or something. The end of the second stanza was the best part of this poem.
I really like your piece... Though I do seem to say that about everything, I only reply to ones that are good, therefor I say that a lot.
"some time i'll look back on this day
recall just your burning face
and crazy frizzy hair
but i'll forget all the fancy words you spoke
and just remember
sun-dried reds and fiery oranges
of a watercolour painting
almost inaudible but for your
subtle brush strokes
of hidden enchantment. "
That is the best part of your whole poem. Especially the part where you relate to painting.