Young Writers Society

*clapping my hands enthusiastically.*
I love it....... LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks Brad -- I'm trying to get back into it. I'll come back to it and attempt what you said.

And thanks Slick -- maybe blend isn't the right word.

Hi Jack,


I'm glad you're still writing poetry.

This, for me, redoubles into itself. The notion of being One is brought up either too much for this, or else this is not long enough to sustain it. Your call. I suggest an overhaul on the first instance of being One but maintaining the proper length.


Best of wishes,
Brad

ummm.... um.

Attempt at romance?

kindaza. sounds. romantic like-ish, sorta- maybe.

I think "blend" is totally the wrong word to finish this off with.

Try one of the following:
me'nage (did I spell right, as in threesome)
harmony
symphony