I love the kids devotion to is mother and how very, very, much he wants to get something for her.
Only beauty tells him what to do.
I also like how this loops back to 0.1.
You can feel his rushed pace in your words, which works out really nicely.
Gah, this is so beautifully done. At the beginning it was a little thick to get through, but it picked up very quickly, and nicely. I'm enjoying this so much, I wish I didn't have only two more to read ^_^ You have an amazing voice.
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