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RAF (Radiating Amoral Flames)

by Firestarter


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Mon Nov 21, 2005 9:48 am
Firestarter says...



Thanks for the corrections!




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Sun Nov 20, 2005 1:58 am
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I liked it. Reminds me of War of the Worlds, though I know you meant World War II. You got really good descriptions, and there's a good feel to the poem. Plus, I really like any story/poem about war.

One spelling mistake that I noticed: firey should be fiery. Also, while correct, skydemons is more often spelled as skyedemons. Although, that may just be an American thing.





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