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Hey sup!
Okay I liked how you said it was like one of those days, then his girlfriend I guess calls, that was good, we all have that.
Although when they were on the phone I couldn't tell who was who, and I thought Nat was a guy, so that was kind of confusing~
Good writing
Technically this should be called "Phone Call" because there's only one call
. I liked reading this except from the potty language at the end. 
Just kidding lol. I agree with Willow, a little back up info would be greatly appreciated. 
This was quite humourous, though I'm not sure why... It wasn't laugh out loud funny, more like, laugh in a quiet controlled manner funny.
I'm so very tired...
lol
Your start is good, but I kinda lost it with the call. Some background info would also be nice. Otherwise, it sounds as though it's up to a good start.