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You have to start out by sending them to magazines..or, just write a book of poetry. Find poetry publishers..and well, voila. I know a kid who did that..seemed to work for him.
It's funny because I have absolutely no idea a) why my poems would get published and b) how you get poems published anyway.
I love your metaphors.
Do me a favour and get a collection of your poems published, okay?
oh god, musical (good musical) poetry, and lots of it....perfect. Don't change anything....
I say "oh god, musical poetry" because it can be sooooooooooooo cool....man. Thanks. A
The first two stanzas confused me until I read the rest. Meaning I had to read it twice before it could actually mean something. I guess that could be good...or bad.
I think the second line should end with "inspiration" and the "to" moved down to the third line. Just a minor change that would make it sound a lot better.
I really like it though. Beautiful.
Thanks. Corrected the typo you spotted.
Hmm, I like it. I especially like...
Except it should be "teenagers", but that's just a typing error.
Great work as usual!!