Wow, talk about dragging up something old ...
I know i do not have a great right to comment since its ike my thrid post but i liked it,
it was mysterious in a good way.
This is interesting Jackineiser Seriously though, I can totally understand the emotion yu were going for.
Even a creamy chocolate doesn’t brighten your mood, succulent and soothing as it may be.
This is the result of me writing when I'm tired, when I've had a lot of beer, when I'm pissed off at my friends, when I feeling pretty lonely, and when I'm listening to Snow Patrol:
This is good. You conveyed the emotions very well, and you painted a scene that rings true.
To be honest, I don't like Christmas either, albeit for different (although similiar) reasons. I find it to be overwhelmingly fake and selfish. I'd be much happier if Christmas was just another religious holiday like the Assumption or All Saints Day. Instead, what's really just a barely significant day has been turned into an orgy of commercialist propaganda.
Anyhow, I liked it.
i like this. so very true! I felt very upset at the start.... but i resisted the urge to smudge my mascara lol. As usual i don't know what to say, but i defo liked it! mim x
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