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i hate the wind

by Firestarter


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Thu Jul 07, 2005 2:02 pm
Chevy wrote a review...



For some reason, this poem reminded me of a movie and my mom. I think the losing the keys part...well, the whole second stanza. It's like you know my mom. Well, now that I've read it again the whole poem reminds me of my mom. o.O Jack, do you know my mom?





they got that magical iridescence that you don't expect to be on a sky rat y'know
— Ari11