I like how you're pulling the threads together. It's going at a great timing. And your switching POVs works nicely.
Space!“You’re saying they set out tomurder?”
Anyone?But worst of all was the death of a completely innocent woman, someone who was more a victim than anything in this whole circumstance.
Glee. This is so fun to read. I can feel Diane's high xD you did her character lovely. The beginning, with her climbing then just *showing up* with Diane went kind of odd for me, but otherwise, great as always.
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