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The problem being is that most of the information I either know already, or have read in books. I don't use that much information about the army from the internet, just info about battles...
What in particular do you need information on?
And thanks for the critique. I should probably distinguish my characters a little better, yes.
If you have not read The Year of the Hangman...then you definitely need to. lol. There's this part in it where the main character (who is british) is cussing at the french people...'tis rawkin'. (muahahaha harlz.)
The one thing I would change about this piece would be the personalities of colonels/generals. To me, they all blend into one because they're all happy and excited and extremely cocky. To me, the 'Nonsense!' thing is the only thing that distiguishes the one guy (?not good with names) from the rest of the leaders.
They are most likely important people, so I would have them stick out a bit more.
Also, can you do me a favor? If you have particular sites you're using for your info, could you give them to me? I need a bit more info on the British army for my piece...